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I've prided myself as a writer for a long time, so when I discovered RPG Maker, it was like discovering an all new, much more enthralling way to tell a story. This is the very first game I've made in RPG Maker, however, I will not be like most people and say things like 'It's kind of bad' or 'don't be too harsh' or anything like that. I will, straight up, say that I like what I have created and I am proud to call it my first game. If you don't like it, be as blunt as you can - BUT - point out what could be better about it. It is currently in alpha stage, but if you play it thoroughly, it should last approximately an hour.