Rebirth (OST Demo) file

Very nice. There are some things i'd like to comment on:

It sounds very much orchestral, but it's not mixed the same way a recorded piece is. Of course, this can be a stylistic choice. But if realism is one of your goals you need to mix it better (using an actual orchestral recording as a reference) and acquire some more realistic libraries.

As good as they sound, the Native Instruments Symphonic libraries don't have the most realistic articulations (especially legato) and your pieces will tend to sound more robotic compared to something like Studio Strings from Spitfire Audio or anything by Orchestral Tools.. Unless you can mask this, but it takes a long time.