This addon simply improves the ingame hints, obejctives and thoughts, so that they make sense grammatically and corrects the captions, so that they match their voice lines. Made for version 1.3
original - Sometimes to proceed on you need to find a special item and apply it on the specific place.
new - Sometimes in order to proceed you need to find a special item and apply it on the specific place.
original - Find some gasoline and the car keys for the truck.
new - Find some gasoline and the keys for the truck.
original - Kevin sounded so detached. Why doesn't he disclose his location?
new - Kevin sounded so detached. Why won't he tell me where he is?
original - The elevator must be in that room behind these gates. No way I can cut through with my torch... Man, I hate thick doors.
new - The elevator must be in that room behind these doors. No way I can cut through this with my torch... man, I hate thick doors.
Update: There were two mistakes that I somehow missed, but Major.ThinhZero pointed them out to me. They are:
1) the line in thoughts about Squad Oscar beign wiped about by the aliens, even though the squad's name was November
2) a line in captions with the word "received" beign misspelled so instead it read "recieved"