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Small Half Life deathmatch map, recommended for 2-4 people. This is my first upload and my first creation from Valve Hammer Editor.

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Deathmatch Test
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knightbazuso Author
knightbazuso

This was deleted from my profile?

Anyways, I see this map has received low ratings and I would like to hear constructive criticism.

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sappy_nirv_bg
sappy_nirv_bg

It' unimaginative and bland. The environment is way too simple even for Goldsource standards.

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KarimIO
KarimIO

A: You need lighting. Badly. If you don't have lights, ensure you have no "leaks", and you have at least one light placed.
B: The map is very monotonous. Spice things up; add more variety. Things like decals, custom props, and world-brush objects are really great. You should also try add different textures. Maybe add watchtowers along the wall or some fencing, or different levels to the wall.
C: Frankly, the terrain looks awful. Either do it properly (there are many tutorials for that), or don't do it at all.

I didn't actually play it, I'm judging this from the screenshot. Good luck with your future stuff.

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knightbazuso Author
knightbazuso

Thank you, I'll try those on my future maps.If you could play it and explore the whole thing to tell me what to do better, I would be grateful. Also, the map is shaped like a capital "I" and there are some bunker-like structures in the corners.

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