You got locked and stuck inside an old house, and you have to get out... but it's not as easy as you think.
Didn´t enjoy this custom story much.
For me it was just confusing mix of jumpscares, annoying humor and illogical events.
I also stucked in that part, where the monster eats the meat - my monster wasn´t hungry at all. After long twenty minutes i had to watch the let´s play and then restart that part.
Yes, you´re on the good way. But obey "humor" parts with non-matching music (they destroy the atmosphere), add some attractive story and improve the level design.