You got locked and stuck inside an old house, and you have to get out... but it's not as easy as you think.
Didn´t enjoy this custom story much.
For me it was just confusing mix of jumpscares, annoying humor and illogical events.
I also stucked in that part, where the monster eats the meat - my monster wasn´t hungry at all. After long twenty minutes i had to watch the let´s play and then restart that part.
Yes, you´re on the good way. But obey "humor" parts with non-matching music (they destroy the atmosphere), add some attractive story and improve the level design.
Pretty good custom story, loved the music changes in some of the rooms and the humour aspect was really nice
Just one point i didn't like though ... everything seemed to blow up or get thrown at you - so next time just cut back on that and then you'll get 9 or 10 :)