3 years ago Daniel defeated Alexander of Brennenburg and stoped the shadow from devouring him.But little did he know that the Shadow was never actually after him, he was instead helping the Shadow get revenge on Alexander himself.With the castle of Brennenburg gone and the Orbs destroyed the Guardian of the Orb no longer has anywhere to go.The Guardian has been following and protecting Daniel for the past 3 years but it is now in trouble.As The Guardian cannot exist forever outside of the orbs, it must now seek Daniels help to find a new orb, so It can reside back in its realm.But Daniels journey across England and its countryside's will not go unhindered, unbeknownst to Daniel, before Alexander's death he ordered all his servants to group outside the castle and ambush Daniel as he left Brennenburg.Of course Alexander did not anticipate the castle's collapse, leaving his mangled servants in disunity.Despite being scattered and left to their own device, Alexander's servants found Daniel once again. Hot on his heels, the grunts and brutes pursued Daniel through the streets of England and far into the heart of the countryside. Their endeavours eventually bring them to the resting place of the last Orb, a feat only managed with the Shadow's help and protection of Daniel.
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From "Harsh" advice I've been given immediatly The rooms in Daniel's house have been shrunk by roughly 40%
Considering making them even smaller.
in an estimated guess level 1 is 37% complete (not including scripting)
2nd level construction begins shortly, The City of London (At least a couple of Streets)
You will be allowed to enter some buildings but it will not be required to progress.
3rd level will be where Daniel makes his final preperations to leave the city.
4th level and on still finaliseing the story.
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I really appreciate the fact of pubblicate your mod,i like the plot of the story,yes u need train with the editor,but thanks to you i'm thinking to pubblicate my own custom story,i'm working really hard on it xD!So good work Torin!
Hey : >. First of all welcome to the modding community yay, feel free to visit the forums or to PM me if you have any question. There's not much to say now, since everything you are doing now will have to change as you learn the editor.
By the way, Kaernk is right with small rooms. When you begin you want big maps, I had this time as well. There's nothing wrong with gigantic maps don't get me wrong (the mod I'm working on is going to feature pretty big ones), but a small detailed room looks A LOT more realistic and overall better than a gigantic room with 1 bed and 1 shelf.
I don't really know what advice to give you yet, so I'll just wait for more screenshots and try to help you out the best I can.
The story seems too goofy.
I have read it over and I'll admit it does "sound" goofy, but what I have in store for it will turn that around :)
Okay umm.. first of all, you are uploading your first story which is a mistake by from your side, and I will explain why further down.
And why do you make the rooms so dam huge? This is something every new mapper do and I don't understand why. My bedroom is 3 times smaller than the one on the picture and I have a bed, sofa, table, desk, chairs, closets, bookshelf and a lot more and I still have space for more! Make the rooms smaller and add details in them is my suggestion to you. Huge, empty rooms are just bland and boring.
What happened with "Don't upload ideas"? This is basicly an idea! You have nothing to show us! There is no progress here at all except for those big, empty, bland rooms taken by a bad quality phone camera or something.
Just, don't take your project to far and don't bother uploading your first story. I did not upload my first created story because it wasn't good enough and I realised that. Keep this to yourself as a learning experience and upload stories when you have more experience, I'm sorry if that hurts, but that's how it is, new stories are rarley good and a lot of people are tired of seeing stories with low to no effort on the site. People don't care if you are new, they will be hard on you and criticize you badly.
if the people want smaller rooms then by all means I'll make them smaller.
Basically this is not an idea, this is something I intend to get done.
Yes the pictures where done with my Ipod because I wanted them to get up there quickly cause I was to tired to actually focus on what I was doing, As I said progress will be slow.
To me this is Progress, I realise that people will be hard on me but I'm ready to ignore those comments that will hold me back.