You had both loving parents and sister Kate. Your dad was very good engineer and studied alone black magic. Your sister sometimes stolen his books about evil power which possessed her soul. She together with Michael tested alchemy and magic on prisoners after on castles employees too. She beat you and locked in the prison cell but you STILL ALIVE. Now in the castle everyone's dead except your sister and you. You know what is her main goal. Your cell is opened after five years.
Finished this CS and here are my thoughts
--> 1st map: I liked the mapping and the only puzzle were the "use acid on slime" which wasn't difficult. The silenced grunt made me happy, 'cause I always enjoy silenced monsters. The use of coins to open chests is great and not used by, like, 99% of the CSs.
What I didn't like: poofer in the closet. Not funny.
--> 2nd Map: Jesus christ, those brutes gave me a run for my money. I thought it was GREAT and HARD! I died twice in this map (and I usually try not to die in CSs).
--> 3rd and 4th Map: I got stuck here because the only hint that the player gets is that the door to the study is LOCKED. Do you know what I mean? it means that players will often look for a key. The fact that you could smash the door isn't explained anywhere. Change the mementos please. I had to use the Tutorial for this one.
Also, I don't think the poofer close to the sewers entrance was necessary at all but that is just me.
As for the mansion itself, I really liked the mapping. I also enjoyed dodging those 2 brutes once you get the east wing key.
--> 5th Map (sewers): I had a little problem with the 3rd wheel. Basically, those boxes are underwater and I couldn't see, for the sake of me, the box that would allow me to get to the 3rd wheel (it was the one in the farthest corner). Please try to make the boxes more visible.
As for the gas puzzle, I didn't like it. It didn't say anywhere that I needed to use 2 levers to open the main gate, it only said that the levers to drain the water were AFTER the main gate.
--> Last map: dear lord this one was HUGE. Aaaaand not clever. I didn't knew you had to use the ladder to get the key for the laboratory and had to use the tutorial for the second time. Next time make the character do some sort of observation like looking up and wondering what is up there or something.
Glitch: I don't know if it was on purpose but when I save and reload (had to use the tutorial), the chests cost NO MONEY to