The reapers have returned from dark space. With Earth under attack and the mass relays in a state of chaos from refugees and the councils fleet engaging reaper forces the galaxy is a mess. The outcome is unknown, the warfare is devastating. The galaxy will never be the same.

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MechaKat
MechaKat May 12 2013, 1:42pm says:

It looks really good! I don't see anything that needs changing.

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Guest
Guest May 12 2013, 1:44pm says:

Its good, but you should try to give it the feeling of as if it was a station, with some humans who can operate on it.
As of right now, it looks as if it was a giant sniper rifle.
Also, make the shape non angular on the "barrel". It would not make sense for a giant mass accelerator weapon to be cubed. The solar panels add a nice feeling to it.I would also suggest to make it a bit shorter on the "Barrel". and make the barrel half openend, simmilar to how mass relays look. They look like omniblade or claws, with two parralel bars.
I also would suggest you remove the Giant cerberus symbol and give it some light to give it the feeling as there was a giant generator or mass
eezo core or something. Also, try to make it look more rectangular. Cerberus guns mostly look rectangular.

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Wolfrahm
Wolfrahm May 12 2013, 2:55pm replied:

Will probably add some more evidence of habitation if more people ask for it.
If you look at the business end you'll see that the barrel is circular on the inside. The angular parts covering it are for cooling purposes.
Yes, A shorter barrel might be a good idea, considering that the length of the barrel doesn't contribute much in a relatively frictionless enviroment (i.e. space).
I'll consider the open barrel idea.
I'm not going to remove the awesomely massive Cerberus symbol.
I guess some power conduits would be nice, Skylin5gtr can add that when he models and textures it, as he's a pro at that kinda stuff.
Cerberus likes hexagons. I don't think I should make this thing more rectangular. If more people say that I should do that, then I will, though.

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LoftySgtTaylor
LoftySgtTaylor May 12 2013, 1:56pm says:

that is even better than before, if that is possible, personally i would keep it like it is in this concept, before it looked to flat, but now it looks like it belongs in the mass effect universe and i believe it will fit in just nicely with all the other WMD's

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Wolfrahm
Wolfrahm May 12 2013, 2:58pm replied:

Thanks. I hope I achieved the look I wanted to go with: massive inter-system sniper cannon.

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LoftySgtTaylor
LoftySgtTaylor May 12 2013, 3:08pm replied:

rereading the above comments, i have to agree, some form of living quarters on the ship, and a shorter barrel defiantly, i also like how the cerberus symbol stands out, not just painted on,

too bad you cant add animations or separate moving part, if you could, it would be awesome to have the barrel move, so every time it is fired you see the recoil from the thing as it psychically jumps back from each shot.

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Wolfrahm
Wolfrahm May 12 2013, 3:18pm replied:

I'm thinking that If I add habitation modules on it then I'll have to remove either the wings or the solar arrays, otherwise it'll get too cluttered. Skylin5gtr can always texture some "window lights" on the model, so that the model isn't excessively complicated. If any of you have ideas on how evidence of habitation should be "displayed" then tell me, and I'll see what I can do.

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LoftySgtTaylor
LoftySgtTaylor May 12 2013, 3:21pm replied:

why not incorporate the habitation section and control room into the wings, if they are the right size, in my mind this thing is bigger than a carrier or the size of the crucible, but i bet its smaller, could you perhaps show an image o it next to a ship so we can see the size, if its not too much to ask that is

edit, like the colour scheme of the original thought so would suggest keeping that, maybe a bit more red

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SenjiBen
SenjiBen May 12 2013, 3:48pm replied:

Definitely agree, the indication of habitation doesn't have to be sticking out, as indeed it might be too cluttered. Some sort of integrated living quarter lights or bubble styled thing would be fine. Also, I love how it's looking now, except maybe only one wing, just so it looks different and not too ship like.

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LoftySgtTaylor
LoftySgtTaylor May 12 2013, 3:53pm replied:

agree, that way it doesn't look to symmetrical and stands out a bit

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Wolfrahm
Wolfrahm May 12 2013, 4:12pm replied:

size chart: Flickr.com

mostly estimates though. In the mod it could be anything from the size of a Reaper to size the of a Alliance dreadnought.

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LoftySgtTaylor
LoftySgtTaylor May 12 2013, 4:24pm replied:

right that cleared things up, place the habitats and control rooms in the wings mate, that way it not over crowding and you can still keep the same design, if at all possible

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LoftySgtTaylor
LoftySgtTaylor May 12 2013, 6:45pm replied:

just been looking through your flickr pictures, this one caught my eye, i really like the design, will it be in the mod Flickr.com

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SenjiBen
SenjiBen May 12 2013, 6:57pm replied:

Agreed, I saw that on the forums, very nice! Hope it will be in-game.

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LoftySgtTaylor
LoftySgtTaylor May 12 2013, 3:41pm replied:

that's what i meant, build it in, not out, so like have windows cut in to the model like on voyager from star trek, where the hull is indented from the windows like i highlight here Moddb.com
its the highlighted red bit

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Wolfrahm
Wolfrahm May 12 2013, 4:19pm replied:

Haha, will see what can do then, but be warned that all it'll look like is a lot of specks, considering the size of this thing.

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SenjiBen
SenjiBen May 12 2013, 4:23pm replied:

Worth it. That's all I have to say.

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LoftySgtTaylor
LoftySgtTaylor May 12 2013, 4:26pm replied:

hey why not make the windows like two three decks big, like a couple of observation decks, WMD posts can be pretty boring, as soon as you enter the battle it is over with one shot, so it i more like a cruise liner with a giant *** cannon added to the front/side

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MrPerson
MrPerson May 12 2013, 2:37pm says:

The prongs you added on the sides are cool, but I don't much care for the black things on the top and bottom

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Wolfrahm
Wolfrahm May 12 2013, 2:56pm replied:

Got those "solar arrays" from the Cerberus Minuteman station's design. If enough people agree with you, then I'll remove them.

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LoftySgtTaylor
LoftySgtTaylor May 12 2013, 3:09pm replied:

keep the solar panels, makes it look like it needs alot of power to fire,

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Piemanlives
Piemanlives May 12 2013, 2:44pm says:

It's definitely looking better.

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ExoticTofu
ExoticTofu May 12 2013, 2:45pm says:

Looks more like a weapon than the first version.

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Nkarpovich
Nkarpovich May 12 2013, 3:19pm says:

I like it! the one thing i'd say for sure is that i agree with lofty and the guest on the living quarters thing. Would just give it that little extra detail.

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With all of the debate of the care package Wolf has done another one and I want to get feedback from everyone. Keep it how it is or go something like this route

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