The reapers have returned from dark space. With Earth under attack and the mass relays in a state of chaos from refugees and the councils fleet engaging reaper forces the galaxy is a mess. The outcome is unknown, the warfare is devastating. The galaxy will never be the same.

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Just the script to the live action trailer I hope to have enough time to work on sometime in the next few months.

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The Sacrifice of the 55th
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RepublicCommando101
RepublicCommando101 - - 340 comments

Seems solid, a couple of gramatical errors, but those are neglible in any case. Love the premise, though i do wonder how you would manage to do this all.

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Wolfrahm
Wolfrahm - - 339 comments

Maybe you "grammar-nazis" could edit the script? If you wish.

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Lord_Setesh Author
Lord_Setesh - - 1,465 comments

Green screening, i would model a rough back drop for a CIC which for Systems alliance ships is simple. Record some basic footage and "green" it in.

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Lord_Setesh Author
Lord_Setesh - - 1,465 comments

I understand that there are a few grammatical mistakes, but no one uses perfect grammar especially people in a battle situation.

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Wolfrahm
Wolfrahm - - 339 comments

True that.

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Bohme70
Bohme70 - - 121 comments

The slight grammar-nazi in me might be freaking out, but that was a pretty amazing thing to read.

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ZetaKiba
ZetaKiba - - 66 comments

Pitty Sins doesn't have a campaign mode, you could've probably included this story as a small opening to the mod, though Bridge Commander would be and ideal game, simply because you're always stationed on the bridge.

- And you said it was an opener for the mod anyways, my bad. You could always find artists to draw out the scenes and make it a slide show, they did that for Legends of Pegasus ^^

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1kon
1kon - - 306 comments

nice to read, question though; lens flares?

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Lord_Setesh Author
Lord_Setesh - - 1,465 comments

Haha, this isnt JJ Abrams Star Trek. With this i was thinking more a hardened BSG feel.

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1kon
1kon - - 306 comments

lol thanks, i loved ME but i found some of the lens flare a bit too much, and loads of youtube vids tend to have too much lens flare.

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Lockerd
Lockerd - - 2,044 comments

wow I had goose bumps...I would love to VO this, damn....just...damn

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Lord_Setesh Author
Lord_Setesh - - 1,465 comments

VO?

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Centurian128
Centurian128 - - 547 comments

In the context, I believe he means Voice Over. Though I could be wrong.

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KaptenHaddock
KaptenHaddock - - 169 comments

Voice Over.

I could also apply for a part, if you wish.

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Lockerd
Lockerd - - 2,044 comments

Voice over, its better than doing a long winded scentance about me begging to be a voice actor for this.

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davidt0504
davidt0504 - - 720 comments

Damn chills. That was awesome.
Perfectly sets it up. I don't know about you guys, but I plan on making a full trilogy playthrough along side playing this mod when it comes out. When I get to ME3, this will beat the hell outta any "galaxy at war" meta gaming that bioware came up with.

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RambosBodyguard
RambosBodyguard - - 86 comments

Really cool, I hope you can find the time to do this because it would be awesome.

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Preplin
Preplin - - 23 comments

Pretty good for the most part. Only thing I have against it is how fast you made the fleet seem to die off. You said the flotilla had 70 some ships in it and it sounded like it was going againts only one reaper. I just feel like a 70 to 1 battle sounds like good odds in the alliances favor but correct me if im wrong.

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Lockerd
Lockerd - - 2,044 comments

every time I imagine the inevitable pause in the dialouge to view the exterior at the battle I hear "My Name Is Lincoln - Steve Jablonsky"

damn epic.

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spud196
spud196 - - 31 comments

That is good and it fits the story nicely could even be added as a short fan film

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danilkkka
danilkkka - - 29 comments

NORMANDY SR 2 OR SR 1 FROM ALINECE

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nicolasshot3
nicolasshot3 - - 1 comments

hello excuse me I'm french and I would like to explain to me how instinller mod?

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KingSav3ge
KingSav3ge - - 373 comments

it isn't the mod mate
just a small script for a video they are going to make
the mod hasn't been released yet.
Écrivez 300 caractères ou moins pour lui n'est pas le matejust de mod par petit manuscrit pour une vidéo qu'elles vont au mod de makethe n'a pas été yet.

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KingSav3ge
KingSav3ge - - 373 comments

I cant read it as i don't have the correct program could someone post it or PM me it?

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The_Viscount
The_Viscount - - 155 comments

Awesome Script. As an actor, I would LOVE to get a chance to audition for this... XD

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fearNO
fearNO - - 13 comments

If you want help writing script or story line just send me a message, I'll do it Entirely free ofcourse:P.. I just love writing stories! XD

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OptimistNinja
OptimistNinja - - 8 comments

As if I wasn't already excited for the mod, now you guys are writing scripts... so sick!

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Ser_Fergus
Ser_Fergus - - 2 comments

By live action, do you actually mean live action, or just animated (As some of these comments seem to imply)? I've had a bit of experience with filming, you could say.

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