Kleiner's Adventures mod for Half-Life

im not lithuanian. im an american. he is a lithuanian.

No offense, but your grammar isn't too good for an American. If you are trying to give a good image, you should double check your typing before posting. Start working on that, and I might give you a cookie.

I'm really trying to help you here, you know.

lol, what the hell? stop beying like that, if he has a bad grammar its his problem, we are talking about mods here not grammar lessons

Ok, after reading everyone's replys, I see faults in both sides. Kaski, you say thats constructive criticism, but I don not think it is. What you are doing is basically poking holes as to what is wrong, and don't offer anything that can be a resolution to the problem. When I issued a media release for my development team's project, I found alot of ppl saying dumb shit like "Not futuristic Enough." How is a comment like "Your mapping sucks, you should have never touched Hammer in your life" constructive? It's destructive.

As for your mod Kadv, I don't think you have presented your mod quite well. I think you're idea is great, but if you got out a storyline for the mod, more people will be willing to help you. Plus, once you get the general story and chapters set up, the mod can progress quite smoothly and people can recognize that it indeed does have potential.

If you are in need of model editing, sprite making, hacking models, or any help in particular, give me a call.

I do agree with you, and I apologize if I have been a bit too rough.

But in my view, sometimes being totally abusing against someone can help him to evolve. In the way that it pisses off the one being abused, and makes him want to show this guy (in this situation me) that he is not a complete loser, and can do better... In this point of view, my writings ARE constructive criticism. It's kinda the same thing that they do in army.

I have gone trough the same thing pretty much myself actually, first I didn't even realize it but now when I am looking at my old work it just make's me laugh... a lot. And I believe it's all thanks to that one guy who made me realize back then how much I sucked, and back then I just wanted to show that guy that I can do better. Now I have seen how right he was.

I haven't really released any of my newer works in a while... Because I still think those could be better. But I can show you how much I sucked few years ago, just look at the profiles below. Back then I was pretty much same level as this Awkook guy here, maybe even a bit worse. But I'll make sure to give you taste of my current works later, and also to give my best to help this mod.

Fpsbanana.com
Garrysmod.org

And that ain't all, or even the worst.

This ain't the army buddy. Plus, this place has rules.

I'm pretty sure my compliments didn't directly break any of the rules. besides, giving straight criticism is my method to try to help. it's not probably the most gentle way to do it, but it works with some people. I'm not probably the best guy talking about this thing, but it doesn't mean I couldn't. Besides I'm still technically trying to help instead of flaming like some people here do. I respect your point of view as well, and I try to be less harsh in future.

Also, instead of just complaining my words, you should give some advises and constructive criticism for this fellow yourself. It's just a little stupid to start war between our opinions. So in the future let's concentrate to work for the good of this mod here.

Haha well said!