Begginer level editor. My name is Dmitry. I live in Russia, in Saint-Petersburg.
**** Yea
Literally no content, Two rooms, avoid.
Positives:
-First map wasn't that bad by its looks
Negatives:
Lacks everything- story, ambience, atmoshphere.
Story: ✕
No story, no points. The ending of this "story" was one of the worst endings EVER. Small room with barely any room to move in, and a text which read "blablabla". 1/10
Mapping: ✕
Two maps, but the first map wasn't that bad. Congrats for making the smallest map in Amnesia history. 1/10
Scare factor: ✕
Nothing scary, strangling or even creepy happened. 1/10
Music & Atmosphere ✕
It had some music, which wasn't from the original amnesia. Strongest part of the story.
Atmosphere, however, nonexisting. 3/10
Puzzles: ✕
One key quest. 1/10
Creativity:
I saw nothing creative on this, except maybe the first map. *It looked fine.
Overall:
It took me 30 seconds to finish this mod. I see no reason for why this mod has 2,6 / 10.
1/10 - Pointless
BAD, VERRRYY BAAAAAAAAAAAAD
If this is your first map, then I can understand. The map creation is good although I didn't see any welders or door frames. Then I entered the next map and I look down and I say to myself, what the he... blablabla? Are you SERIOUS?! I have to say, this wasn't too good but I'm the kind of person who goes easy on a beginner.
this really sucks
The map is so short and virtually unplayable as it has no value at all.
1/10
You are kidding, aren't you? After I had completed this in 15 seconds I got between three walls with "bla bla bla" sign... Why did you even upload this on Mod DB?
This "story" is not even long enough to be a demo. It took me a minut to finish.
Positives:
- Decently good level design for a first story
- You sucessfully created a working english file
Negatives:
- It's not english so I can't understand a thing
- No intro
- No door frames
- No story
- 1-2 minuts gameplay
- "blablabla" ending, are you serious?
- No scares, no monsters, no puzzles except for a key quest, no challange
I'm sorry, but this is a 1/10 according to me. I admit, the level design was surprisingly good for a bad story like this, but I only saw this OKEY level design for a minut.
And stop blaming everything on "I'm a begginer"(Spelled beginner by the way), even a beginner should know that 146 KB is not a full story... it's not even half a map :s.
So, if you are going to create stories in the future, make them longer for christ sake! Create a story! Not just in the description, but in the maps as well and in english so people can understand. It looks like you just rushed to upload something.