You are Emma, daughter of esteemed scientist, Dr. Robert Coleman. Ever since his discovery of the mythical Orb of Power, he has vanished, leaving you alone in the family estate. With strange things happening, you wonder what has happened to him. The story begins as you wake up in your room to find an ominous note from your lover. As you play, you will unravel Emma's Story.
Like the custom story. This custom story is a long story, puzzles and many scares that's for sure. There were some glitch that i dident really like (2 Glitches)
*1 Glitch - I think i was in the torture chamber and when you were in one of the cages where you move the bed and there is a ladder going down and then when i was just walking i just randomly fell down the map and died please fix that for the other players.
*2 Glitch - When i was in the some sort of pig torture where they burn bodies bla bla ..... And then when the flash back or dream came i was in the pig standing so technically my half body was outside and the half is inside i can see outside until the dream or flash back was done please fix that to for the other players.
Other ways really like the custom story the story and the scares and the puzzles. Good Job and Good Luck. <Game Rating (9/10)>
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Honestly, I didn't bother going past the first section, as it was terrible in every way.
First off, item placements don't make any sense, theres no narrative that dictates anything for that matter.
Even the first note you pick up is just rushed nonsense, instead of using gameplay to show a narrative; you used a note with the most one-dimensional character who just so happens to know everything about this orb of power? Why? And ending it with 'Your lover' are you serious? Who in their right mind does that? Why didn't you use the letter to portray this?
Infact, all notes on this floor followed this pattern, one-dimensional jargon.
At first I thought it was just a poor start, but what gives you a 1 is that manniquin section. Are you actually serious? The first 'scare' in the game and you use THE most tired cliche in the horror genre? If thats how you want to grip the players, then consider me lost, theres way more original mods out there.
And this is aside from the fact that you beg for votes in exchange for future content. You have bad skills and bad practises.