This is a short custom story, i made it for Ken. I try to make it good, but if you find any bug sorry for that. I hope you going to like., Sorry for by bad english

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Way too short, terrible map design, the key can clip through the drawer (fail) bland, just an awful custom story.

WHAT IS THIS ****!

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Shives says

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This custom story is short, pointless and has no real scares.
Sure there is the grunt and the waterlurker, but that's all!
There are no pathnodes in this custom story, the level design is poor and all the levels are very small. For the next time: Make bigger levels, make real scares, add path nodes to the enemies and the most important thing is to know that it takes much time to create a GOOD custom story.

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CheesyDeveloper says

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This story is so short so I might as well type down my gameplay

I spawned inside a cell and a key is lying on the floor infront of me. It's, ofcourse, unlocking the celldoor (You lock someone in but leave a key so he can get out? I see no logic in that). I find a key after a while and a grunt spawns. I only had 1.5 sec to hide so he saw me at first. Luckily he gave up. I unlocked the level door with the key.

I find the celler in the house I just went into.

End of chapter 1

I go deeper into the cellar (with only 2 rooms), I pick up the key and a water monster surprisingly spawn behind me. I jumped past him, went back to the house and chapter 2 ends.

I unlock a room with the key I found and picks up another key lying on the floor. A naked guy appears infront of my face for no reason in a pathetic attempt to scare me. Fails miserably.

I unlock the house entrance with the key.

End of story.

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The only reason why I give you 3/10 instead of 1 like most stories like this one deserves is because I actually see potential in you. You used music, billboards, working monster with path nodes and some scripting. In short, you, unlike most people that create stories for a certain youtuber, friend etc, tried to create a story. It just failed.

Next time:

Work alot more on the level design! You actually have a decent start, but there's too many texture glitches and lack of details. Maps are also too short in my opinion.

More and better scares! Naked guys that appears from nowhere = not a good idea!

More challange! You have nothing but key quests.

And a much longer story! This took me 5 minuts to complete.

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Because you tried and didn't overuse lame jumpscares, here you go.

3/10 - Bad

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