This is the story of how you were brainwashed, and woke up in a place you have never seen before. All you know is, you have to escape wherever you are.

CheesyDeveloper says

1/10 - Agree (7) Disagree (6)

I have no idea what people see in this... This is the worst "story" I've ever played. I don't know if you are trolling or if you are serious about all the "greatness" with this cs, but let me tell you, there is nothing good about it at all.

And please, stop making lame excuses as "I'm only 12 years old". I know 12 year old kids with professional level design skills. No matter how old you are, you should never relase something like this.

Also stop blaming that you "don't see the errors" or "send me a picture of the overlapping textures". HALF the maps are nothing but overlapping textures, how the hell can you miss them? O_O

Positives:

- An attempt to create a story
- You know the basics I guess

Negatives:

- No story, notes, mementos, no description, only a few key names
- No intro, no ending
- No challange
- Nothing makes sense
- Water streams at the first room?

- What did I need the acid and the crowbar for?
- Too much supplies
- Almost no scripting at all! The only scripting you can do is key quests
- Horrible level design with 1000 texture glitches, missing walls, tourches rotated upside down and inside out

Conclusion:

You need to stop being so arrogant and take what people say into consideration. I have no idea how you can miss all the errors, they are everywhere!

Keep stories like this one to yourself as a learning experience only. Improve your level design, learn how to script and come back when you have something worth playing.

I may be a bit harsch but I hope you understand that saying that something like this is "amazing" is like an insult to the people that actually spend time to upload something great

V2:

Tried next version and sadly not much has changed. A few glitches removed, key names added, otherwise just as bad.

1/10 - Pointless