You wake up in a strange house and you don't remember how you went there. I hope you will fear =)and please give feedback here!
No story, and the monsters appear so predictable that there's no real tension. For a free mod to kill half an hour with, it's perfectly respectable, and it has one or two effective moments, but there's not much about it to make it stand out from the crowd.
This turned out to be another survive-and-escape story like most of what I see around here, but at least it was functionable and there were things to do despite having very little story to it. The monster encounters were too predictable and now I'm afraid to touch keys. In the end, there were too many monsters to keep it enjoyable, but at least it made for a funny video.
Personally, I thought Better Place was a good custom story. A little predictable at times, but a few of the jumpscares really got me. At a technical standpoint, I had no bugs or issues, and the level design was solid. I gave it an 8/10 overall because of its predictability, but honestly, i really enjoyed Better Place.
Mapping in this CS was not so good as it should be. Little attention to detail, no puzzles, boring style of type "pick up key and evade the monster". Monsters were there everytime and never disappear so there is no point in finding a place to hide. The Hub was not a hub at all and it was too big and empty.
But +1 for credits music :)
My knee hurt after that teleporting naked guy. Only part I hated but I won't take away points. Great overall story, good for your first. I wasn't expecting much but that teleporting naked guy changed my mind ;_;