You are Mathew McNamara almost 79 years, and you have a problem... You don't really know if you're awake or not, but you can feel the fear running trough your body... You must escape, but, how are you going to escape if you don't even know where you are? You've been sent into your memories... Starting in your forgotten childhood. Your life wasn't exactly easy, and that life has a price... pay it, or die...

Review RSS Feed Humeba says
6 Humeba

Jul 28th, 2013 0 people agree 0 people don't

Interesting concept.

☣Kaernk☣ says
5 ☣Kaernk☣

Jul 1st, 2013 2 people agree 2 people don't

I don't know if some people didn't know that they must manually install the custom items and that's why there's so many issues in this story.

To the author: I actually understand if alot of people missed this or didn't care about it because we don't have to install it manually otherwise. Put all the folders in the custom story folder and it will work

Positives:

- Brilliant idea for a story (not a cliche for once)
- For a first story, some areas are actually decently good
- I see great potential in you
- Someone else that is "alive" as a monster
- Music

Negatives:

- No blockboxes (can jump of the map almost everywhere)
- Too short
- Missing details, some bad lightning and lack of ambient sounds
- Should be voice acting in it, even if I have fantasy ^^
- Very few scares and monster attacks
- Pretty confusing sometimes, and it feels like the story isn't really complete

Conclusion:

I really enjoyed this story despite how bad the level design is. It was something refreshing from the "you don't know where you are you must get out" cliche stories, and the music really made the story line even deeper.

The story was confusing sometimes and way too short. To me, it feels uncomplete and I do wish you add voice acting next time. But great job man! Improve your level design and make a new story like this one and it will be epic I'm sure! :)

5/10 Average

Gaviao says
10 Gaviao

Jun 29th, 2013 0 people agree 3 people don't

read my comment! i hope there's a part 2 of this cs!!!

GoodGamePlayer says
9 GoodGamePlayer

Jun 28th, 2013 1 person agrees 3 people don't

A nice story-telling custom story.

HumiliatoR says
2 HumiliatoR

Jun 28th, 2013 1 person agrees 4 people don't
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What? Where is your effort all I saw is really undetailed maps with really crappy map design, like I see in the first map no effort just 5 minute made map.. and I can see through the walls too. Every map has no effort only some scripts and there are like none scares, just maybe good story and using monsters for them. But seriously this is so unfinished with map design, it's that awful. Sorry to be too harsh, but this is really not good. There is a lot missing walls, those "Door entrances" look really ugly because you dont have door frames even there.

I'm sorry, but I dont like this at all just plain dumb, no effort to show here.
I think some peoples maybe enjoy this because they don't care this mod map design, but I really care and that's one of the strongest point of mod making, story is second one and scares as always. I didn't scare once, however it was great storytelling if this is only your point. Forgive my bad rating, but I'm just honest with you.

2/10 - Really poor

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7 annaristich

Jun 30th, 2014

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9 nachomanx2000

Nov 13th, 2013

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5 sizzjee

Aug 21st, 2013

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8 Norbator2

Jul 27th, 2013

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3 KillaRiku

Jul 24th, 2013

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