Your name is Jack and your grandpa's name is Dereck.Once you get a message from your grandpa.This is where this story starts.

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Really poorly made custom story. Really questionable design choices by having keys that open pointless rooms, something about this feels rushed/unfinished. Onto the cellar area, wtf? You activate two buttons, that do absolutely nothing, you gain a sanity bonus but nothing happens, the gate remains locked, so I barrel clipped through to try and progress more, but hit another dead end moments later, as you use a key to enter yet another pointless room? Unless the item required is well hidden within the water or something, just a really poorly made story.

5

Typical house to cellar Amnesia story with a major bug that made me lose ALL interest. The goo/flesh wall that you can just click on to go right through. Absolutely unbelievable. That made getting any keys and solving any puzzle completely unnecessary. I proceeded a little while longer after that only to get lost in a dark maze. Needs some work. Should be deleted from the released section until the bugs are fixed.

Not impressed

The story made literally no sense, I can't say anything more than that on it. Especially the ending. It didn't flow at all and there was a lot of pointless information thrown in that provided little to no incite on the actual story/task at hand.

Though some of the puzzles were nice, the one with the key in the cellar was more of a **** off than anything else. You should put something saying a key showed up. Since hitting the buttons makes one think they gate unlocked. "Oh, a key must've spawned" isn't someone's first reaction when hearing something unlock after pressing buttons.

The mapping and scripting were well done, however. Some maps were a little empty and lacked detailing but it actually wasn't bad.

All in all it was a 6/10. It wasn't terrible but there are things that really need worked on.

Meh. I got bored. Sorry :/

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DnALANGE says

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Here is my review so far.
I can NOT continue in the cellar.
I heared a click sound after the 2 buttons..
NOTHING happend i guess.. the gate door also still stuck..
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Here is some things you need to fix.
1 Paintings are ALL loose from the wall
2 Be sure all skyboxes are BLACK when you are ONLY inside a house etc..
3 SOme ceiling glitches and wall glitches
4 Check some pointlights.. look weird. { color them more brown and bigger.
5 Check the start positions. they are all 1 grid too high and some are pointing the wrong direction.
6 Make some quests and or notes about what to do \ search.
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Overall i lke it.
It''s not so detailed but you can do that in any update.
The scripts are okay and you didnt do like jumpscares. big + for that.
Hope i can finish it. only need to know what to do.
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6.5\10 now.

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zys says

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paul84 says

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Loirinha says