The story is pretty basic. It's about escaping from a place where you have woken up. Also, there's some jumpscares, and some scares which is not 100% relevant to the story/environment. But this is our first Custom Story and we wanted to try different things/scares out just to test it and to see how we can experiment with different functions.
If you guys didn't see, the author actually said this was a school project AND their first Custom Story created ever.
I don't think you should be too rude when you criticize, everyone have had their first time right?
There's some misstakes here and there of course, but for being their first CS ever I think this is good, even if the jumpscares are a little bit over used.
In the future, focus more on the atmosphere and spend more time on the mapping to make it feel scary around the player and make scares that does not involve things popping up right in front of you.
I did at least enjoy this Custom Story, and I give it a 7/10, just because it's your first one.