I fear my life is in peril. Where I am or how I got here I have no recollection of, for my memory is fragmented and my mind scattered. I find it necessary to write down my thoughts for fear of losing them again. I don't know how many times I have drifted in and out of consciousness, or for how long I have been here. I see visions beyond this nightmare, visions of wood and carpet instead of stone and dirt, I hear rain.
Ok , i liked pretty much everything except the sewer part cause it was impossible to figure out that you should go there and the frustrating boss part where i knew exactly what to do but it was so difficult cause of some stupid mechanics ( stupid door opening and closing by itself), some bugs ( sometimes you couldnt open the door of the holy room) and the irritating turns of the camera when the boss was coming out and you were trying to prepare. Cause of these i think that many people won' t see the end and thats sad .
Oh my god, I just beat the story with all relics and... Just wow. You should be commended for making something that unique and gripping with DEFAULT AMNESIA OBJECTS. The only two problems I had with it was there was not enough Laudanum. And that for okay-ish computers, the large "hub" room that you start chapter 2 in lags at about 10 FPS anywhere in the map. I don't know if you can, but if you can tone down the mapping for that particular map, like, split the big hallway towards the mechanical door with a loading screen, that would be great.
I think it is very fun, and the boss fight made it 100000X better. The only reason I said an 8 was because I pickedup something and it stretched across the whole map, but didn't interfere with me. That and I can't rate a 9 or 10 because I just created an account. check out my walkthrough of this custom story. youtube.com/mrmoskyz