You wake up, You find out that you have woken out in a memoriable castle. You find a note, that says you must go through trials to escape. But it's not only trials you have to... worry about .
This custom story was simply okay. Not marvelous, not horrible, just okay. Definitely needs to be longer, for sure.
Scare Factor: Not very scary, but then again, it wasn't really meant to be scary.
Monster Usage: It was okay, I guess. But it wasn't really spectacular. Smarter monster use might be in order. The whole "monster charging at you while you try to exit" scare is predictable when it's been used a hundred times.
Storyline: Kind of weak. It just felt like the excuse for a series of rooms full of puzzles and enemies. Not an impossible one, mind you, but the story should be fleshed out more in my honest opinion.
Supply Amount: It's okay, but a health/sanity potion would've been nice. And maybe one or two more oil potions. And you could've easily lost your lantern on at the end, easy to get turned around.
Bugs: On the wall below the grate where the Brute appears, on a shelf, there is a floating stack of papers.
Puzzle Difficulty: Quite mediocre. You're practically handed all the answers. Except for the puzzle involving fixing the gate.
Vocabulary/Grammar issues: It could use some tweaking, but it's not so horrible that I couldn't get what was going on. Always willing to proofread for english translations.
Finally, I would like to say that I did like the little thing about getting a drink of water early on. And yes, this custom story needs to be WAY longer. Maybe that's why the story feels so lackluster. I'll keep an eye out for an expansion.
Map and History are beautiful, but because I give 6 is very simple is a Very Short History and Trivial All games come in horror, however, Longer, but this Council and Very small.I advise you to stretch a little history, and to put more script.Because the 'appearance of Monsters, There are few times, but they disappear after a short time.
tips to improve a bit all,edit is good,and i liked it :)
Awesome custom story I played some shorted custom stories but not as great as this. Pretty much I was scared every time. I like the custom music it kinda makes me think that the monsters are near. Short story but a terrifying experince. I highly recommend this custom story. Good Luck and Good Job. :D
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A good CS whith some good ideas but too shoort and not so original. The prison is very scary! I ****** me off when the monster break one of the doors, haha! ^^
Well, i give it 6/10 and i hope so you gonna make others CS more accomplished! :) But it's still great. Good luck.
I'll be upfront, the story, spelling, and grammar is very lacking to the point where it got me more confused than intrigued, but the presentation and the atmosphere, as well as pacing and level design do enough for me to recommend this to others willing to look past the writing.