You are playing as Alma. A young girl living in a castle somewhere in England. Alma's father don't like Alma and do what ever it takes to punish her if things don't turn out the way he want. Everything went even more downhill when Alma's mother left their family. You wake up in a prison cell and have a feeling you have been there before. Its like the time have been turned backwards and you have to live through a horrible part of your life again. Alma is a psychiatric story about feelings and seeing the world through the eyes of a young girl with special needs. This CS focus a lot on the story itself, so please don't rush, explore and read notes carefully. Justine patch required Credits: Chad Pain - voice acting (steamcommunity.com/id/ChadPain)

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0 comments by ☣Kaernk☣ on Oct 23rd, 2012

Newest version of Alma (Alma complete v.2)

1: Made it easier to escape from the cell in the first map (hint and the object is more visible)
2: Added fog outside the library - so it looks like the forest part later in the story
3: Changed a couple of notes a little
4: Fixed a few typing errors
5: Added more supplies in the prison section

Thanks to all of you who played my story and helped me to improve my work!

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Alma V.3 (NEW VERSION)

Alma V.3 (NEW VERSION)

May 5, 2013 Full Version 4 comments

The newest version of Alma uploaded half a year after the original one. It's more or less the same thing but alot of changes have been made.

Alma - V.2 (ORIGINAL STORY)

Alma - V.2 (ORIGINAL STORY)

Oct 19, 2012 Full Version 11 comments

Version 2 of Alma. This is the first and original story for Alma.

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Opnamehere
Opnamehere Jun 3 2013, 9:26am says:

I like the story, but the level design is somewhat poor.

Also, you should add subtitles to the part when you're locked in the room and that monster (assuming it's alma's father), is talking to you. It was really hard to hear what he said.

I'm going to give it a 7/10 because you are one of my fav custom story maker.

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☣Kaernk☣
☣Kaernk☣ Jun 3 2013, 3:07pm replied:

Alma's father is not talking at all. You probably mean the demon. This was made for over 7 months ago and I did not know how to add subtitles. I added notes instead. And this is my first custom story so I don't doubt the level design is pretty poor. My level design is improved in my other stories and is extremly improved in my newest story Dark case.

Thanks for playing and thanks for your feedback!

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Tristan65487
Tristan65487 Jun 1 2013, 12:13pm says:

I have only reached to part with the soul protector. I can already tell this mod is great. There is a great atmosphere, good scares too. Most people use jump scares far too often. I love the effort, he only thing I fear now (beside the scares) is that you didn't rush the end. I have seen a few stories where they have a great beginning, okay middle, and horrible ending because they just wanted to rush to have a custom story.

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Stikenir
Stikenir May 25 2013, 7:36pm says:

Great mod, I like it! Although, you should do something about the ending... an epilogue would be cool. Because the ending feels weird...
But that aside, everything is awesome about it! The voice acting, the mapping, the story line and the scares! Good job!

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☣Kaernk☣
☣Kaernk☣ May 26 2013, 5:32pm replied:

*SPOILER*

She arrived at her mother's house and her mom is sitting at the fireplace (I don't have a model so the player must have some fantasy). I made the ending for half a year ago and I won't change that now.

Anyway, thanks, glad you liked it ;)

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☣Kaernk☣
☣Kaernk☣ May 16 2013, 3:52pm replied:

Wow man, thank you so much! It's so nice to read such positive comments, glad you loved it ;)

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LustinForBlood
LustinForBlood May 8 2013, 2:32pm says:

I just played your CS and I thought it was pretty good.

There was some issues with spelling but I am going to assume English may not be your first language(?) & that maybe why there was some spelling issues. If you have a decent grasp of the language run your future CS's quickly in Microsoft Word or something so you can quickly correct some words/sentences or, you can get someone to do a kind of proof-reading of your script(s). It may add extra time to the making of your CS's but it will also improve it, especially if it is like this CS in which some of your CS was done through the way of notes & descriptions of items.

Speaking of the notes: I liked that you gave a bit of an insight into Alma's character through the use of notes. It made me feel a bit more "connected" to the character.

The story was good & easy to follow/understand. I really liked the adding of the character "Soul Protector". The only issue I have with Soul Protector is that many people wouldn't expect a demonic being to be so caring & nice. Kind of goes against what we traditionally think when we hear that a "demon" is in a story. However, that braking of the mold is a good thing. It challenges what we expect when we hear of a demonic being in a story/game.

Overall I thought your CS was great. The only real issue I had was that of spelling but as I said; I can't give you a hard time for it if it isn't your native language.

I will keep an eye out for more of your stuff in the future. :)

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☣Kaernk☣
☣Kaernk☣ May 8 2013, 6:05pm replied:

In my defence, yes, english is not my first language and this is the first story I uploaded half a year ago. I've learned more english by now. Also, I understand that you feel that my spelling in this story sucks because it does, but so far my spelling is more or less the only critism for this story except for a few people that doesn't care about the spelling and actually managed to find the real bugs/errors in the story.

I think it's a subjective thing what we think a demon really are/do. Some people even think god is an ******* even though we are taught that god is a good thing/person/spirit or what ever.

Thx for your feedback anyway :3

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☣Kaernk☣
☣Kaernk☣ May 8 2013, 1:11pm replied:

Thanks :3

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Very good story. The voice acting was great, and the map design was good as well.

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