Norman (WIP) image - Silent Hill: Alchemilla Mod for Half-Life 2

Guys, criticize the character, as possible we take into account all your wishes.

It looks really nice IMO

Maybe it's just me (I'm kinda sleepy), but the only thing that seems a bit off is his lower jawbone (on the left image), which looks a bit too big. But again, it may just be me

Looks good to me.

Looks awesome

This sucks he looks all grey! But seriously, nice modelling, this mod is going to be sweet.

looks great!

He is similar to James.

Give him a big beard

eyes too close together, maybe? thats really the only "bad" thing i see in this lol

I agree he would look good with a beard, also depending on his personality give him some stress lines, or if he's a happy fellow laugh lines. Other than that he looks like he would fit greatly into the Silent Hill world.

Exceptionally nice model for a ModDB project.

I don't know how to comment other than well, he looks ordinary. He's just some guy with a generic jacket and jeans, you couldn't tell him apart from crowd of people in any way. While this has been the starting point for most Silent Hill games, I'm personally not a fan of the idea so I always try to equip my characters with something that makes them unique somehow. Like some equipment (weapon holster, cellphone, flashlight...) an accessory (a camera, backpack, glasses...), an original hairstyle or hat or just some piece of distinguishing clothing. Now when I think of SH characters, how did they ever get away with such boring concepts? :p

I'm saying this more as an interesting topic of discussion, not an improvement suggestion, I think you guys are on the right track with the character.

Looks superb there is nothing I would change, only ask like the rest of the comments you consider facial hair of some kind (as a test).

For me it look's like that shoe's are just a little bit too big? And leg's are pretty long.

But anyways really awesome model! :)

nice work guys !

nice nice nice!If it is possible to put there an 3d person view on source engine ingame - i would like to see how he will look in that interiors.

Всё же, приятно видеть почитателей классического "Silent Hill'a". Модель очень хороша! Браво! Жду с нетерпением новой информации и релиза проекта!

This is honestly one of the best models on Moddb I've seen anyone make. Ever. Can't wait to play the finished project.

Needs more swag :p! Hehe kiddin', SH characters always look a little plain and normal, wich I like. Make him so we can relate with the character, like it would be some guy living next door. Like said here, a beard would also be nice. Now he reminds me of Harry Mason and James Sunderland. Change it up a little, a different type of guy. Make him look a little "worn out", like he has faced tough times in his life, you know, SH-style.. Otherwise, excellent model!

Take an actors face as a reference, also he should look more buff

The character looks awesome, but his eyes look a bit too close to each other.

I like it as it is, looks very human, lots of personality.

needs a beard
and messier hair

I would make him more introvertic by look; make the trouser leg lay on the boot, and the shirt "should" cover the belt. Pants could be more loose, baggy. I like the look of the face though, it's not cliché.
If you make him look like someone too much, he might not look like anybody at all.

does this model mean that the game will be in third person or is this just a model for cinematics?

Prominent eyebrows are suitable for facial expressions, but yes the eyes stand a tad bit too close. Other than that, can't wait to see this poor human tortured for his sins.

Looks really cool. Maybe the nose is a bit too wide? I'd scale the width of the nose down a tad bit.
Awesome work!

I think it looks amazing, Although his eyes seem too close together other then that it looks awesome.