A brand new custom story.
Positives:
- Flawless voice acting
- Emotional story
- Creativity
- Custom music (and pretty good to)
Negatives:
- Very short (took less than half an hour to finish)
- Not very clear what to do, lacks mementos
- Level design is pretty average
Conclusion:
Krypton141 sums up this story perfectly. The voice acting is very good. Sounds like something out of a movie.
The story is good, but way too short. I really feel like you could have added more events, or made the events you have a little longer. It took me less than half an hour to complete it. It usually takes around that time to get immersed, and before enemies usually shows up in the longer, well made stories.
Level design is way too average. Nothing special about it at all, but the custom, never used in a story before music really weight it all up.
If you make a new story in the future, add more details to your levels and make the story a little longer and I will absolutely play it.
7/10 - Good
Story 9/10
Atmosphere 6/10
Music 10/10
Voice acting 10/10
Maps 5/10
Not bad!But given the excellent voice acting, music and a good story, the author could have worked more on the mod.The maps look somehow frivolous...
This mod, like My Love, doesn't dazzle with its level design or puzzles. The mod is based on quality and well-told story, which is why I think it deserves a high rating.
Honestly, I'm not very impressed. The story wasn't very interesting, there wasn't much build up, nothing really got me enthralled in this story, the fact that you can just leave the laboratory enter the main hall after brewing up the second potion and then bugging out the game didn't help. The only good thing I can say about this story was the protagonist's voice acting, was excellent, but everything else, very underwhelming, lasts about 17ish minutes.
Positives:
-Great voice acting
-Interesting story
-The experience was overall unique
Negatives:
-Design was a bit too average to my taste
-Mostly no events
Neutrals/Nitpicks:
-The chemical gathering was pretty annoying (nothing too major, so I'll include it here)
-Lack of scares. However, due to the mod being story-focused this will not affect the score
-Short. I don't necessarily have problems with short mods, but I felt like I wanted more after it ended
Story: ✔
Although it included clichés, such as chemicals and immortality, it was presented very well and was overall interesting. The voice acting was also very good. 9/10
Level design: ⁓
Mixed bag. Although it almost glitch free, it did severely lack details at places. With just a bit more detail this would have been a very good mod. 6/10
Scare factor: N/A
Puzzles: ✔
There really wasn't that many puzzles, but when there were they were good. 7/10
Overall:
This mod is an unique experience you definitely should try. Good story and good voice acting make this mod very immersive.
Score: 7.33 = 7/10 - Good
It's true the map design is empty and poor, BUT it doesn't matter much in story-telling custom stories. Impressing storyline and mainly, great and clear voice acting. For the idea and the voice acting, it deserves 9/10.
Brilliant voice acting. That is all
The puzzles were easy and there was pretty much only 1 monster encounter...
There just isn't much more but, at the same time, it wasn't badly delivered either.
Despite being short, I liked it. Hope to see more from you.
I really enjoyed this custom story, but it was over quite quickly, just as I started getting into it. I decided on a 7/10.
The strongest point was the voice acting, one of the best I've heard in any amnesia custom story. Christopher's voice was clear and a balance was made between too much emotion and not enough, I really loved this aspect of it.
For how short it was, the story was really good as well, I hope you release a sequel or something continuing this story. But just as I was starting to get immersed into it, it was over.
The maps were original and innovative, but they lacked "meat", some billboards, decals and decorations would have livened them right up.
Sometimes I was a bit lost as to what to do, maybe just some more elaborate mementos would've gone a long way.
If it had of been longer, about an hour of gameplay maybe, I would definitely have given it an 8 or 9.
Still, I enjoyed playing it and I hope you make more!
It was far, far too short in my opinion. As soon as the story started getting good it was over, which was rather disappointing. I didn't have enough time to really start getting into it all. The maps were really quite empty and where lacking life.
I did, however, very much love the voice actor for Christopher. I typically don't like voice acting in custom stories but he has a wonderful voice and did a very good job.
I really like the story you had going, but I really wish it were longer.