Comments - Thorup87

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hmm the sites got abit shuffled. This is page one.

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(character) stepped into the room, it was dark and he could barelly see anything. He felt along the frame of the door. No light, perfect! he thought to himself. He slowly took a step into the room. There was a cracking sound as he stepped in some broken glass. Why would (character 2) come here?.

Never mind the lame story. My point is that when writing like this. You sort of become the character. as time goes by. You can sort of feel the room or location and interact with characters. And after that its pretty simple once you have the scene.

pic. 1:
Dark siluet in the doorway. Textbox[narrator]: meanwhile somewhere else

pic 2:
hand feeling down frame Textbobble[char.1thought]: "no light, Great!"

pic 3:
Hand infront of first-person view

pic 4: foot stepping in broken glass. Text[sound]: grgghha(or how ever glass sounds like)

Pic 5:
close up of character. Textbobble: "christ, why would (char2) come here".

Well thats just an example. And i dont wont to sound arrogant or anything. Truth is im actually impressed what you got so far. Its just that this progress as helped me the most. So i just thought id share it with you. Oh and by the way, your thoughts about clair in the silent hill universe and how the the universe would manifest in the mind of clair. Nice! Great thoughts so far. Im looking forward to reading your comic if you post it here.

Anyways here my link to DeviantArt: Thorup.deviantart.com

-Thorup

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Seems like you put a lot of thoughts into this. I like your drawings. You seem to have a great understanding for light and shadow. proportions seems to be spot on. And if you're only 16 thats pretty amazing. Ive also been working on a comic. Well i have for the last 6 years now. That said it was actually first 3 years ago that i actually got some kind of context to the comic. Im hoping to someday be able to finish it. Well the reason im telling you his is because im also to lazy at actually completing the story. But i read that you designed the story as if it was a game. And i dont know about you but when i did that (Yes i actually did that) That didnt help me at all. Sure i came up with a number of great settings and character (most of which i actually had to scrap cause of story changes over the years). Im already writing this to long. ill try to get to the point. My point is that the thing that helped me the most was to actually write it as novel. like this:

cool, just give me something to draw and ill do it.

wow, hey i dont know why i first saw your message now. You needed an concept artist. I know im half a year late. But if you still need me just send me a message

You need any help with this??

Hello
im a concept artist. Im currently looking for a project i can help out in some sort of way. I want to be a comic book artist/writer, sometime in the future. so im looking for projects to help me evolve my skills. I checked some of your concept arts and thought it seemed interesting and something i could relate to. Im not very good at coloring or environmental drawings. My style consist mostly of comic styled incs. Characters or perhaps comics ill gladly create. Anyways, if you guys are interested, ill gladly join your team.

Heres a link to some of my works:
Thorup.deviantart.com

Hope to hear from you!

i actually agree with the short legs. normally when i draw i use the guide that Leonardo da Vinci shows in his Vitruvian man. That theres the exact length from the top of the head down to just below the crouch, and from the same are to his bottom of his feet. Based on this model i would say his head would be extremely tiny.

I think its great... you clearly show you understand the concept of overlaping... which many people dont understand... with this knowledge theres no end to what you can accomplish if you keep practicing... and the image is great... its enjoyable to look at and its easy to see what everything is... keep it up

tegnet i hånden

har lagt Tegningen ind på min profil, så kan du jo lige se den

jeg vil da godt prøve med star wars, men har aldrig rigtigt prøvet det. Andet end en boba fett tegning jeg tegnede for et års tid siden.

hej, jeg har boet i Viborg for en 4-5 år siden. Men aner ikke om det så er mig du mener.

you guys should diffidently go with the classic resident evil camera view, it makes it more scary!

PS. If you guys need a character artist i would like to help. there's some pics. on my profile you can check. Im a bit better now, then i was when i posted them. But i want to help and put my skills to some use.

Well, contact me if you're interested.

It isn't in resident evil 3... what you are refering to is the hunter gamma... the one in this picture is hunter alpha... the red ones are called hunter beta

and you dont think resident evil is?

amazing concept, great artist

cool... reminds me of the drawing stile this guy i once knew had, when i was at drawing school... it looks great... maybe the feet is abit to long... i dont know... anyways its really good.

nice... it looks awesome!!!

actually the proportions are just right... arms length are the same as the hight, body is 6 heads high, groint is at the half of his height... is proportions are perfect... great job

i just read about the game and thought ok this sounds interesting... then i watched a clip from it realised... de snakker sku dansk hehe

dont know if its possible, but you should consider puting a grain filther on the screen...

well you could have informed the team when you made the pic. of what we all should work on... well since you havent been on msn there might be a chance youll see this... the nemesis with rocket launcher is finished... ill put it in my moddb profil later today.. just leave a message if its good enough... and maybe a new assignment

the mod might be dead... me and others from the team havent heard from laughing man in weeks now

nice... looks awesome

wow very nice drawings... althou i dont like the first line cause i think its a bit to flat... the last 2 lines are really well done and easy to understand... But i think they look to mush like the halo guy and crysis guy... maybe u should make them a bit more unique...

nice concept... its simple... and still detailed... i really like it..