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Musicians at ModDB

Musicians at ModDB

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This group is for all the musicians at ModDB. I place to show off their work and to discuss music. You could also ask for help for a song or give suggestions...

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::idiot::
::idiot:: Nov 15 2006, 5:03pm says:

hey. Your automation thing was cool. The actual effects and stuff were cool. Only thing I might suggets lowering the volume on the beat a bit or pushing up the melody. It just seemed like an undertone, but not really.

The starting part, where you like have this whole rising action like thing where it get all louder and bigger, then it just mellows out slowly. It was a complete anticlimax. And I hate anticlimaxes. Especially because you got me really pumped up for th top. Yeah, other than that it was cool. But I guess you were going for the sort of wavy pattern...

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RatoN
RatoN Nov 13 2006, 8:33pm says:

Sorry. I've haven't been on Mod DB that often lately. When I come on, I mean to respond to your comments but I get sidetracked.

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Jambozal
Jambozal Nov 13 2006, 6:22pm says:
Quote:# Requirements to join:

# Must be a registered moddb member for at least 2 years!


Unless I missed a year and it's suddenly Nov 2007, I don't qualify ;) I shall be a non-vet 4 leif!

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Jambozal
Jambozal Nov 13 2006, 3:37pm says:

Am I? Is it only one year then? I thought it was 2

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::idiot::
::idiot:: Nov 10 2006, 9:02pm says:

yeah, wasn't monotonous at all. Very very exciting and kept me going sort of. The only thing I might say, was teh ending was a bit abrupt.

I think one of the first lessons my music teacher thought me was end a song a long note.... or something lke that.

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TKAzA
TKAzA Nov 5 2006, 10:12pm says:

sorry the volume just goes up and up and get louder with out any variation.

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::idiot::
::idiot:: Nov 5 2006, 12:04am says:

wow. The new one was much better. I completely loved how it ended. But still some stuff. I don't know if I didn't notice this about the old one, or it's new but you know the like riffs for the foreground. It's got some really catchy ones, but they don't flow well. I don't know what else to say, or how to help it. I don't listen to this kind of stuff often so yeah. But some of the stuff it feels out of place, it comes back to normalness in like a second later. But just for that one second. I just think, hunh. It's the times when you have that starting riff play again. Yeah that's about it. I'm not sure how you can help that though. Just listen to people's music.

Also, on a side note. I think you should starting working on giving your songs a sort of plot graph. These are kind of short so you can't do it here. But just think about it. I don't know if you know drama stuff, but you must have learned about it in english. Like introduction, inciting moment. Climax, that sort of stuff. Anyway, lots of really like intense type music needs that, especially techoy stuff like this. You need to start off, then start building up, and changing and going back. Then reach this point where everything is just like pew, bam and ptsh. And then like sort of snap out of it somehow. and then end it somehow after that. Not too quickly though. But you need longer songs. Just think about it. That's all. This is just something I noticed with musicians, of all types. Wow sorry for the long post.

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::idiot::
::idiot:: Nov 4 2006, 10:19pm says:

For trance thing:
did you make that melody wierd thing yourself. Well anyway. The thing was't great. Mainly because the back ground beat wasn't good enough. It didn't meet standards with the foreground. Which was really frikin' sweet. Good job with that. I really loved that. but the main thing. The effects and stuff. Yeah, sounded really good. Did the cheese thing give that sort of effect to the foreground thing?

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::idiot::
::idiot:: Oct 26 2006, 8:56pm says:

Acid was pretty cool, though umm yeah. Some of the stuff you could tell it was looped because it ended abruptly. Like how it ended. Though your music needs a bit mroe intensity, it seems like this is all just an intro to some other song. A very long and repetetive intro. But it was still pretty cool, I know I wouldn't be able to make something liek that. though you kinda need to put more melody into your song. Just one riff can be really helpful, you sort of had like notes and stuff in this one, but that sounded more like part of the beat. Anyway, keep at it. You'll probably become pro soon enough, at the speed your going at.

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nebbyfoshebby
nebbyfoshebby Oct 23 2006, 10:39pm says:

thanks for the comment, yeah i have been using FL for a while so if you have any questions i can help you out.

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