Absolutely love this game!
I am posting some constructive criticism in hopes of helping boost your game. I quickly lose interest in games or websites when I see grammatical or spelling errors. I am not sure if english is your first language or not but I wanted to point out a couple things I noticed. The introduction story has:
A overwhelming darkness.
Has taken over your mother's spirit.
She is trapt inside a mysterious world.
It should be An overwhelming darkness and there should not be a period after darkness as it is not a sentence. Also, trapt is not a word. It should be trapped.
I am not criticizing this with a mean spirit. I truly love the demo and am looking forward to playing the game. I just wanted to let you know so you could fix it or change it if you want to. There may be other people who don't purchase a game or product because of errors of this type.
Good luck! I will be watching for this to released.
Would love to win a copy!
Would love to win a copy!
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