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0 comments by MasterofMetal on Nov 25th, 2013

I'd like to ask for a raise of hands, but it's impossible because you're reading a blog and I can't see you hands, but I am assuming everyone has seen Jurassic Park. Did anyone like it? Yes? But the sequels, however, they failed to live up to the last ones standards, the reason being that everything that was new in the first was reused in the second and third, making everything that was "WOW" turn into something that was "ugh, again?". A chain of events occur to cause a group of people to find themselves on an island being chased by dinosaurs, and eaten one by one until only the main characters are left alive and find a way off the island. After watching it happen three times, it quickly becomes a boring plot, especially if there's no twist.
The rumour of a fourth movie of this same series, supposedly called Jurassic World has prompted me to suggest a new, possibly more innovative storyline for a fourth/fifth Jurassic Park movie.

Around about the same time as Jurassic Park and the two other dinosaur wilderness ranges were being constructed, a fourth, little-known installation was also set up. The purpose of this complex on Isla Estrella was to study the behavior of dinosaurs more closely and effectively than its other tourist-attracting counterparts. Basically it was more of a free-range research facility, another investment InGen failed to officially list. The employees here must take extraordinary lengths to remain undetected by the resident dinosaurs so as to not ‘contaminate' the results. So unbeknownst to the dinosaurs, they all live in captivity while it may not seem like it. Believing that the dinosaurs are unable to reproduce, the employees use the same techniques as seen in Jurassic Park to recreate the dinosaurs from their eggs.
Then one day, something wrong happens with one of the batches of velociraptor eggs: something causes them to hatch prematurely, and die within a matter of minutes. One of the employees, Janet Keen, manages to save one of the infants. But she exposed it to human contact. Any dinosaur that has seen a human must, regrettably, be destroyed for fear it may contaminate the results of studies into pack and solitary behavior of certain dinosaur species. However clean her record is, Janet doesn't like the idea that she would have to hand over and end the life she just saved. She sneaks the infant back home to her residential lodge and raises it over the years. Janet and the velociraptor, whom she later names Felix (sex is told by the presence of primitive feathers at the back of the neck), bond like a mother and son, disproving the stereotype the previous three have left us with: that all dinosaurs are cold-blooded killers and nothing more.
The fact that Felix is a boy and not a girl like the rest makes Janet wonder if it was intentional, or the fact the thing that went wrong caused the intended sex to be changed.
Through several near misses, Janet keeps Felix hidden from all other staff.
Eventually, the lodge becomes too small for a velociraptor to hide in, and Janet decides to take Felix out to the free-range section of the island, though knowing full well that it could jeopardize the entire research program. She and her reptilian friend part, though Felix is left absolutely baffled as to why his adoptive mother would just leave him like that. And what were all these new creatures around him that had the same skin texture, but were bigger or smaller? He doesn't like it there.
Meanwhile back at the main facility, the administration receives a call about the Isla Nublar Incident and to monitor for any hostile or overly curious behavior on the dinosaurs' part, and also to search for these mystery eggs that Dr. Alan Grant reported he saw.
Scared, lonely, and rejected by every wild pack of velociraptor, Felix finds a way back to the only place he knows where he is accepted - Janet's lodge. He's spotted and an alarm is sounded. Just hearing the word from Isla Nublar, the orders are to shoot and kill before the rogue dinosaur develops a taste for human. Felix temporarily evades capture and finds Janet, who's relieved to see him safe, but also worried that he shouldn't be in the compound side of the island. She tries to get him back over, but he refuses and is captured, and Janet arrested.
With the detection of eggs in the velociraptor population, the InGen security forces assume they were Felix's doing, and decide to start fresh by designing a waterborne virus that would kill velociraptors and only velociraptors and introduce it to the island's water supply. With no parents, the infants would die off quickly either by exposure or by predators.
Felix is infected as a test, in front of Janet in an opposite holding cell no less, and is left to die as the security detail climbs in the helicopters and head for Isla Estrella's only freshwater lake. But Felix miraculously recovers from the contagion, and escapes along with Janet. She directs him to a lab to synthesize an antidote from his blood, and head to the lake to disinfect the water supply. Along the way, Felix defends her from some of the velociraptor packs that hunted him when he was in the wild.
When they reach the lake, the helicopters have gone, but the effects of the contaminated water are clear; bodies of velociraptors hang at the edges of the spring twitching and writhing in pain as the virus kills them slowly. Not just raptors, an adolescent Tyrannosaurus, and several other herbivores are also infected - lying on their bellies moaning.
Isla Estrella's InGen administrators see they've made a big mistake and tell their staff to pack up and leave as the project has completely been mucked up and would cost too much to fix.
Janet applies the antidote to the lake and injects the affected dinosaurs, and in turn waits for each to recover. Knowing she saved them stops them from eating her and her accomplice, and all walk their separate ways. Felix and Janet make their way back to the InGen complex to find everything being packed away on boats in the docks, getting ready to sail back to mainland America. The security details on board deny letting her join them in their exodus so long as she had Felix with her. Janet knows what drove him to come back to her lodge, and refuses to leave him behind. The InGen administrator reminds her that rescue will not come for her if she stays - as all the phone lines have been severed and helicopters are being taken - but still she refuses, and watches as they sail away to the horizon.
Her and Felix's fate remains a mystery to this day.

So how's that for a movie idea? It'd probably need some cleaning up and a multimillion-dollar budget, but I think it has potential. Of course, that's a bias statement coming from the person who thought about it from scratch between 1:30 PM and 9:26 PM.

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SinKing Oct 20 2013, 4:27pm says:

I like how you think. Great comments in the humor and parody group! Now I just have to remember coming back here to read your blog.

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Col_Jason Oct 14 2013, 10:42am says:

Ok i read the first chapter but still with no cookies.

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MasterofMetal Creator
MasterofMetal Oct 15 2013, 9:17am replied:

Did we have a deal about the first chapter, or all of them? Do remind me, because I specifically remember I said if you read all, you will receive a whole mountain of them.

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Col_Jason Oct 19 2013, 2:44pm replied:

ahh ok but the problem is iam too lazyyyy Dx


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SolitaryMan Oct 9 2013, 10:49am says:

Thank you for accepting my friend request ;)

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MasterofMetal Creator
MasterofMetal Oct 9 2013, 10:01pm replied:

It's not good to make friends with strangers; you never know what may be inside their van. But this is the internet. And what do we say to vans?
Not Today!

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Mr-Gency Oct 9 2013, 12:13am says:

I keep thinking the dude in your avatar is hugging someone.

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MasterofMetal Creator
MasterofMetal Oct 9 2013, 1:52am replied:

You want to see it happen?

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Turkish007 Oct 7 2013, 12:01pm says:

I saw your question about wolves and Turks.

Wolf is the symbol of Turks all over the world. It symbolises the wolf that showed Turks the way from Central Asia to Anatolia. It really holds lots of place in our culture. For example, Turkish money from 1920's:


There is also the symbol of the wolf you do with your hand:

This means you are a Turk and applies to all of the Turanic world. You do this in Kazakhstan, they will know you are one of them. You do this in Turkmenistan, they know you are one of them. You do this in Hungary, they will know you are one of them.

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MasterofMetal Creator
MasterofMetal Oct 2 2013, 1:06am says:

Novel is up to 181 pages, 90,000+ words, for anyone who cares. Past halfway.

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Turkish007 Oct 7 2013, 11:55am replied:

Good work man!

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Sakura Matou
Sakura Matou Oct 2 2013, 7:29am replied:

I care..

If anyone cares that I care..

Anyways you should be proud that is quite a feat!

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MasterofMetal Creator
MasterofMetal Oct 2 2013, 10:44am replied:

Correction: 91,673 words and counting (writing more now).

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