Also known as "Marcusyaho" Action/horror gamer and level designer. I can help you with more or less any Amnesia scripting and Level editor problems. I'm also available if you need a map tester

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Mod Review on Mar 18th, 2014 - 8 people agree 3 people don't

- Horrible level design (walls are not correctly connected, glitches everywhere)
- Boring and badly written story
- Not scary in the slightest
- No challange

I would perhaps have given you at least 2/10, but you're not even trying. How do I know you're not trying? Because you made two stories half a year ago, and you made absoutely no improvements in this one. You don't even know the basics, like correctly connecting walls with each other. Not even the dam basics and you think it's good enough to be uploaded?

If you are going to make a new story, learn how to actually make maps and scripts first. Watch tutorials or what ever, just don't upload maps you didn't spend more than a few minutes on.

And for the third time, TAKE screenshots WHILE IN GAME! NOT the level editor.

1/10 - Pointless, author did not even try.

TheApartment
1 Review

Mod Review on Nov 29th, 2013 - 1 person agrees

Positives:

- You know how to make a full conversition and add custom music...

Negatives:

- Texture glitches everywhere
- Pointless and horrible story
- Everything else is completely pointless
- No ending credits

Conclusion:

Waste of time... This guy obviously didn't try.

1/10 - Pointless

Diddomagik - MOD amnesia The Dark Descent
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Mod Review on Aug 29th, 2013 - 6 people agree

It's the Italian language so I decided to take some time to translate it before I played it. Nothing but a huge waste of time

Negatives:

- Almost no story at all
- Horrible "scares"
- Horrible level design
- Mostly everything else :/

Conclusion:

The level design has so many holes, texture glitches, stretched walls, floating objects and horrible scares so I was surprised when I saw a place without any.

I'm telling you what I tell every new author. Don't upload your first story! As hard as it sounds, but even my first story was way better than this and I didn't upload it because it wasn't good enough.

In short: waste of time. Practise more and then come back.

1/10 - Pointless

gloomy mansion
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Mod Review on Aug 21st, 2013 - 2 people agree 1 person doesn't

I will do this review in a different way this time because I can barley find anything positive about it and you are new so just lining up the issues will probably not help you that much.

What you need to think about for next time:

1: In-game screenshots! Don't use your phone, don't take pictures of the level editor, we want to see screenshots of your story IN AMNESIA.

2: Create a story! Don't begin working on maps before you know what your story will be about. Get an idea! You don't need a start to finish story, but at least think of the basics. Where does the character wake up/start? Why does he wake up/start there? What is his/her name?

3: Improve your level design. Seriously, you have 1000 texture glitches, walls are not correctly connected with each others, the candles are too far up and doesn't do any utility, they are rotated so some of them are inside the walls...

4: Be creative! Add details! When you have the base for your map, let your creativity flow! Add nice details, light effects, billboards, design your room in unique ways.

5: Learn how to script! This sounds very rude I know, but all monsters spawn immediately making them very easy to spot, very easy to avoid and not a slightly bit scary. You have no quests what so ever and no scares either.

Conclusion of my gameplay:

I spawned inside a very boring and uninteresting room. I heard a monster and understood that this is a rookie map immediately. I went from one room to another while avoiding the monsters without even trying to hide from them. I eventually found the exit, was forced to constantly jump and run to get passed the grass and went inside a house with only one room with a huge amount of HP potions for no reason at all. The End.

1/10 - Pointless

Take what I said into consideration and I promise you it will be better! DON'T rush and DON'T UPLOAD STORIES LIKE THIS WHEN YOU DON'T HAVE A CLUE HOW TO CREATE ONE. It take weeks up to months to complete a story, not a few hours.

The Secrets of The Old Mansion
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Mod Review on Aug 11th, 2013 - 2 people agree 3 people don't

Every week, a new story like this one. I wonder when people will learn Amnesia is a horror game...

Positives:

- A few creative areas to be honest. Just not very well made

Negatives:

- No story at all which is making me extremely unmotivated to play it
- No music
- No details, mementos and very few notes
- Lame scares, flying naked guy
- What did I need the orpiments for? ^^

- The only monster bugged several times
- "Surprise motha fucka". Seriously dude? How old are you?
- Most rushed ending ever

Conclusion:

Create a story line to start with and then build up a good atmosphere.
What we have here is a bunch of maps with absolutely no scare events (except lame jumpscares), bland level design and really poor scripting. Practise some more before you upload another story.

1/10 - Pointless

Brain Washed
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Mod Review on Jul 1st, 2013 - 5 people agree 1 person doesn't

I have no idea what people see in this... This is the worst "story" I've ever played. I don't know if you are trolling or if you are serious about all the "greatness" with this cs, but let me tell you, there is nothing good about it at all.

And please, stop making lame excuses as "I'm only 12 years old". I know 12 year old kids with professional level design skills. No matter how old you are, you should never relase something like this.

Also stop blaming that you "don't see the errors" or "send me a picture of the overlapping textures". HALF the maps are nothing but overlapping textures, how the hell can you miss them? O_O

Positives:

- An attempt to create a story
- You know the basics I guess

Negatives:

- No story, notes, mementos, no description, only a few key names
- No intro, no ending
- No challange
- Nothing makes sense
- Water streams at the first room?

- What did I need the acid and the crowbar for?
- Too much supplies
- Almost no scripting at all! The only scripting you can do is key quests
- Horrible level design with 1000 texture glitches, missing walls, tourches rotated upside down and inside out

Conclusion:

You need to stop being so arrogant and take what people say into consideration. I have no idea how you can miss all the errors, they are everywhere!

Keep stories like this one to yourself as a learning experience only. Improve your level design, learn how to script and come back when you have something worth playing.

I may be a bit harsch but I hope you understand that saying that something like this is "amazing" is like an insult to the people that actually spend time to upload something great

V2:

Tried next version and sadly not much has changed. A few glitches removed, key names added, otherwise just as bad.

1/10 - Pointless

Grandfather's House
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Mod Review on Jun 26th, 2013 - 1 person agrees 2 people don't

Yomamma? It's just a ************* key? I don't care if you are 12, this is a serious community with serious stories. You have to start thinking about the community if you are uploading your stories for the community.

You think it's fun to type childish things like that? But does the rest of us think it's fun? People rate it 1/10 so apparantly, they don't.

You said you made it for pewpiedie. Then why did you upload it here? Send it to him then! To be honest, I don't see why even Pewdiepie would enjoy this map :s

You even took a picture from Mansion 1408 wich is misleading and a very pathetic thing to do, since it's not yours. You have potential, you can use the level editor after all, but you have to grow up and actually spend time on your work in the future.

Positives:

- You know how to make simple scripts, that's a start
- You know how to upload your map... if that's good or bad I don't know

Negatives:

- You took a picture a picture from Mansion 1408 Moddb.com congratulations, you are a thief
- No music, almost no ambient sounds, bad lightning, no details...
- No story
- Childish humour
- 20 seconds long
- Horrible level design. A long corridor with 20 statues, some drawers and a few other things and a bedroom is supposed to be a house? Are you serious dude?

Not worth the 20 seconds it has to offer

1/10 - Pointless

Goodbye with home
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Mod Review on Jun 2nd, 2013 - 2 people agree

This "story" is not even long enough to be a demo. It took me a minut to finish.

Positives:

- Decently good level design for a first story
- You sucessfully created a working english file

Negatives:

- It's not english so I can't understand a thing
- No intro
- No door frames
- No story

- 1-2 minuts gameplay
- "blablabla" ending, are you serious?
- No scares, no monsters, no puzzles except for a key quest, no challange

I'm sorry, but this is a 1/10 according to me. I admit, the level design was surprisingly good for a bad story like this, but I only saw this OKEY level design for a minut.

And stop blaming everything on "I'm a begginer"(Spelled beginner by the way), even a beginner should know that 146 KB is not a full story... it's not even half a map :s.

So, if you are going to create stories in the future, make them longer for christ sake! Create a story! Not just in the description, but in the maps as well and in english so people can understand. It looks like you just rushed to upload something.

®©JM~Castle~RELEASED©®
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Mod Review on May 3rd, 2013 - 4 people agree

I have to agree with the rest, this is just pointless... :s

Fine, I understand that you wanted to upload something, but it seems like you uploaded something just for the sake of uploading. It took me 2 minutes to complete!

Positives:

- I'm surprised how well the scripts works. They are extremly simply and not impressive at all, but the basic scripts used in the story is 15 times better than the story itself

- WOW you added 2 custom items :O

Negatives:

- Glitches
- 2-3 minutes of gameplay
- Level design is... ummm... yeah....
- No story

- Horrible english (we all do mistakes but... wow... you even failed to spell "*****" correctly)
- ***** jokes
- Stephano
- Nothing makes sense

Do I have to continue?

Please, if you ever create a another "story", put a story line into it and take everything I said, and what the community said into consideration because this is pointless and should only be used as a learning experience

1/10 - Pointless

DIEt Sodapoppin
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Mod Review on Mar 24th, 2013 - 7 people agree

Another "troll" story. If you love stories with 100 key quests, no details, lame mapping and no story line, this is the right one

1/10 - Pointless