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Maggot4ever Author
Maggot4ever Jul 18 2009, 4:43pm says:

Procesing..?

OR FAILED UPLOAD ? D:<

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Afnopo
Afnopo Jul 18 2009, 4:55pm says:

Damned you.

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Maggot4ever Author
Maggot4ever Jul 18 2009, 5:55pm replied:

Why.

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Afnopo
Afnopo Jul 18 2009, 6:24pm replied:

I wasn't in the video. :|

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Maggot4ever Author
Maggot4ever Jul 18 2009, 6:55pm replied:

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaah. Now i get it :D

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dafatcat
dafatcat Jul 18 2009, 6:12pm says:

lol

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Maiten
Maiten Jul 18 2009, 6:12pm says:

FAILED UPLOAD

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dafatcat
dafatcat Jul 18 2009, 6:40pm says:

-combine scene is too drawn out and boring
-needs more detail
-is too dark
-the metal door doesn't fit it's frame

happy?

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Maggot4ever Author
Maggot4ever Jul 18 2009, 7:15pm replied:

*sigh*

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tymaxbeta
tymaxbeta Nov 29 2009, 12:05am replied:

It's only the framerate he used to record, as well as only his first real map and recording

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Maiten
Maiten Jul 19 2009, 5:31pm says:

esta bueno,usaste un monton de props en algunas partes,lo unico que no me gusto fue el tuboe ese de gas o lo que sea que se le notaban las 8 caras

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joure
joure Jul 23 2009, 10:02pm says:

I think this is a pretty awesome map, that touch withthe birds was epic, seriously I hope you don't mind but it insipred me to use that too. :P

The way you have to get into the building was a good use of the suroundings and having the player to think a lil on how to advance.

I think overal the brushwork is really nice, some of it is a bit too blocky, but that's just me being picky.

Dafatcat is right on the scene, just tweak it and try and make it a bit more interesting, this is where faceposer comes in handy !!!

I though the detail was enough.

I dunno I didn;t thought it was too dark at all O_o.

Anyway, good work man, you're deffinatly going to get there mate, just keep on doing what you;re doing now and all will be fine.

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cW#Ravenblood
cW#Ravenblood Oct 14 2009, 10:22am says:

lol
nice but low gravity???

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Maggot4ever Author
Maggot4ever Oct 16 2009, 6:08pm replied:

naw the video quality is quite ******

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tymaxbeta
tymaxbeta Nov 8 2009, 12:37pm says:

really nice work there, but, next time do not set the host_framerate to 30, it always screws with the timing of things, all in all, nice work
PS. it is better than Waylay ;D

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Maggot4ever Author
Maggot4ever Nov 19 2009, 6:51pm replied:

yes, it certanly is better than waylay :).

Thankz.

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PedobearNED
PedobearNED Dec 9 2009, 2:23pm says:

my first maps were ugly they didnt even look liek something :S i wanna map like this too *takes Maggot4ever's brain's)

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Maggot4ever Author
Maggot4ever Dec 11 2009, 11:55pm replied:

Alrite :D!

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D!RT
D!RT Jan 2 2010, 9:45am says:

i reckon the building design's/textures layout is good but what makes the 'place' seem odd to me is where it's located ...yeah maybe it's foggy that day ...but where is it actually? in the middle of some mountain valley? ...also the last building yellow color doesn't really match up with the look you got going there ...(like the previous buildings) but hey thats just my opinion ...overall i think its pretty cool tbh ;D

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Maggot4ever Author
Maggot4ever Jan 21 2010, 1:22pm replied:

thanks. the building is place in a valley, like you said.

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HotAssFuzz
HotAssFuzz Nov 21 2010, 11:22pm says:

Brushwork 4-10
Lighting 5-10
NPC - 6-10
Detail 4-10
Overall 4-10

Needs detail, remember time and passion is what makes a good map! Not quick and easy

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Maggot4ever Author
Maggot4ever Nov 30 2010, 7:27pm replied:

Upload date: Jul 18th, 2009

This is pretty old hahaha, I'm quite better nao.

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Oh yeah! i finally managed to upload this.. Please, tell me what i should improve. I made a list of errors so dont tell me this things:
- Fail Displacement
- Screwed Lighting
- Fail Combine Script
- When the elite combine does some signals, 2 combines should appear but scripts failed..
- Me shooting the wall like a n00b at the end of the video D:
- Windows without frames

I think thats all.. so if you see anything more tell me!

PS: Surprise, Surpirse! afnopo isnt in the video :D!

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Jul 18th, 2009
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