"The Dark Side of the Force is strong in her. Yet, still her potential does not reach it's full focus. And to do so, she left the Sith and turned to the Jedi, would they help her understand the force a bit more, or will she be on her own? This is the story of a young woman, by the name of Alena who's Destiny is uncertain. Will she be a Noble, Selfless and a hero? Or will she be a villain, consumed by darkness, bitterness and hate?"

Report article RSS Feed Joleebindo's Quest into the Unknown Regions Part 2

Posted by Fenris58 on Nov 13th, 2011

The Unknown Regions is full of dangers beyond imagination. I was involved in many wars across the galaxy. Many I was forced to fight in, others I chose. After I left Corulag, I headed for the Unknown Regions as I said. With my starfighter I jumped from one system to another. Many planets I found turned out to be barren wastelands, others gas giants far larger then Bespin. Finally I stumbled onto a very strange world. It was full of trees and life. I felt darkness coming from the planet however. I decided to land to find its source. The source I would find out was the planet its self. There was alot of life most of it angry; filled with echoes of the force. You could feel the screams of countless people who had died. Fueling the power of the Dark Side.

I then decided to look into history. I knew there was a reference of the shield of light being used to block a Sith Lords escape. I finally found it which took a few hours. On Yavin 4 during the end of Exar Kuns War, the Jedi used the force to create a great barrier of light preventing the Dark Lords escape after he became one with the force. The light trapped his spirit into one of the temples. The Darkness tried to gain a hold of me but I resisted; finding no sentient life forms upon the planet I left.

My journey then took me across many star systems. Untill finally I came upon another unknown planet. During this time I had been gone just 2 months, Elom was being bombarded by the Old Republic. I could feel the screams of horror echoing across the galaxy from the tragedy. It made me shudder and made my spine grow cold. Blood had been spilled in an unorthodox fashion. I hated hearing those screams. I wished they would stop but they didn't it grew more intense soon afterwards. Thousands perished in the great bombardment that layed ruin to the capital city.

The unknown planet I had stumbled on fed off on some of those screams. The Dark Side ran strong on it. In order to understand those screams I landed upon the planet. Darkness gained ahold of me quickly. On this planet there was intelligent life though it was warrior like. I kept a very low profile, untill finally a few discovered me and tried to capture me. I killed them with my lightsaber when they threatened me in their own tongue. I had used the force to enter their minds and learn their language as Revan had done with the Rakata.

I was feeling the power of the dark side within me and it started to overwhelm me to a near point of no return.

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Adenn`Verda Nov 15 2011 says:

Awsome :D

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Ten10dix Nov 16 2011 says:

I find it amusing that, even after creating a Republic and standing alongside Peace and Justice, and the Jedi, that you were once a Sith. You still have Darkness in your soul, I sense it, I feed on it, I power it. Yet you ignore it, you ignore the temptations, you ignore it`s shouts of Anger and Hate. You would need to be strong to ignore the Darkness that calls to you, that or a fool.

One day, in the far future, you shall see the errors of your ways, you shall see how the Light only blinds you and that only in Darkn can you truly see...

Btw nice story :P.

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Mace-Windu Nov 16 2011 replied:

you may feed on it but that will one day be your downfall Ten

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Ten10dix Nov 17 2011 replied:

Everything falls, what counts is rising back up. No matter how many times the Galaxy beats me or the Sith down, we shall keep on coming back simply because everyone has Dark Thoughts. Everyone had Nightmares, everyone has Hate and Pain and Anger and Death. They are apart of Nature, as are we. Darkness shall always be there, sitting in the corner, waiting, plotting, killing, feeding, growing...

One day, we shall rise. The next, we shall fall. The day after that we shall die, the next we shall live. Such is the way of the Universe, such is the way of the Sith. Don`t worry though, I`ll be sure to kill you first if ever we go to War, you seeing what we Sith do to certain "uncooperative" planets might make you go mad...

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AK151 Nov 17 2011 replied:

I may be a Jedi/Gray Jedi, but that was a really epic comment Ten xD. You need to make that a quote on the New Sith Empire page or something...

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Ten10dix Nov 18 2011 replied:

Why thank you. Full RP mode on their xD. Though I spotted a rather annoying error "They day after that we shall LIVE (as we fell the other day xD) and the next we shall DIE blah blah blah". I might put it on the summary or something ^^ It does sound pretty cool.

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Fenris58 Nov 22 2011 replied:

I just noticed your error. "One day, we shall rise. The next, we shall fall. The day after that we shall die," I can't stop laughing :D

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Fenris58 Nov 17 2011 says:

" the war, the true war is not between fleets, warships, droids or soldiers, they are but crude matter in which we test our selves. The war the true war is waged in the hearts of all living things between our own natures light and dark." - kreia

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