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I wont bore anyone with a long and pointless bio so here is the quick version. I love to listen to music, I love to make music, I love to watch anime, I love to write and I am extremely passionate about my two projects ^_^.
War In The Evening Sky - Sample
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A boy hears sounds and runs outside his home to see the evening clouds light up as an unknown war is fought above the clouds. The boy stands there confused, yet taken by the beauty of the dangerous light show in the sky. ---- This is a work in progress that I started tonight. Just wanted to share ^_^.
Hmmmm, very reflective... calm, but IMHO, too solemn.
Ah Feillyne no matter what time of night, I can always rely on you to reply. Thanks for that ^_^. I appreciate the advice and at this point your right. Right where it cuts off I am actually going to have it get a bit more..."active" I guess I would say. Nothing that would ruin the mood and story of the song but enough to give it a good ending.
Thanks again for the reply Feillyne it's always appreciated! :)
Np. :-)
Very reflective like Feillyne said. I've read the paragrah and closed my eyes, to see if I could put myself in that position - and I can definitely see it. Although it seems to not show enough of the 'war' side. There are rumbles, but I'd like to hear more that would indicate it more as a war than perhaps.. a storm?
Not entirely sure if I explained myself well enough, but there you go!
Nice work overall,
Scott "Sythen" Baker,
Lead Level Designer for Outbreak: Condemned.
The second half is going to be a bit more.....proactive in the war side, but this is meant to reflect more on a child's innocence over the war aspect. Imagine the clouds lighting up like fireflies in a dark night. That's basically the same idea i'm going for with this. The light booms are merely to symbolize something is going on, not specifically that missiles, machine gun fire and whatever are occurring.
i like the paino.to me,in this track, it represents a child's playfulness.but still i dont get the feeling that there is a war or something is wrong,it might be that the booms are too rythmic,they're not random and well,if someone skips ur explanation of the scene he/she will probably consider some sort ofa drum rythm.adding a little bit but foreboding ambient washes might do.