So, someone was asking me how to write a good fight scene...and i was bored today...long car ride and what not...SO I WROTE ONE! Why tell when you can show?
Sadly, i wrote more of a mini-story, not just a fight scene, and the fight itself isn't very long...woops...
Fun part is, there is going to be a bit more to this story (which i am just about to start writing) and it's going to tie in with my main story. YAY!
As Ahsoka and Anakin fight off a seemingly endless line of droids, each wonders why there is such a large force at this small base. They take turns using to Force to fling droids at walls, and slicing them with the same accuracy as a doctor and his scalpel. Ahsoka uses a single swing to turn the last droid into scrap,
"What could they be hiding here? I thought this was just a small base, and we could take care of it by ourselves."
Anakin shrugs,
"Not sure Snips, but be careful."
"Okay Skyguy. Not like anything could hurt me with you a..."
She stops mid-sentence when she feels a surge through Force.
"You feel that too Master?"
"Yes, I did. But what ever it was, it didn't feel Dark."
They both shift back into a fighting stance as they feel it again, this time it's either closer or just more powerful. As they walk down the hallway, they feel it a few more times, it comes and goes, almost like it is searching through the Force for something, and just happens to pause on them.
"If it is looking for us, it would already know where we are, and would have gotten to us already."
Snips states as they walk, she continues,
"And if it was part of the CIS, it would already where everything is, and wouldn't need to look."
The intense feeling of power returns, and they both are shocked by the snap-hiss of a lightsaber springing to life only a few feet in front of them. The honey-yellow blade swings up, lighting the face of a human male.
"You are very smart young padawn. Your strength of mind has been proven, now to test your strength of body."
Both Anakin and Ahsoka bring their own lightsabers to life, and she barely has time to think before the man uses a wave of Force energy to fly at them. They trade bows with a speed that makes the fight look like a light show. The yellow-bladed man jumps up, landing in the cross beams of the ceiling.
"You two are an awesome power together, but I am here to test only one of you."
He waves both hands, one making a pulling motion and the other pushing. Ahsoka is pulled away from Anakin as the ceiling falls into a wall between them.
He stands back, watching her move.
"Are you ready young padawn?"
She gives her reply by running at him, but he just stands there right to the point she would strike him, and blocks her blade at the last moment. After several minutes of blow after blow being blocked, she starts to use the Force to move around with greater speed, but he matches it without even using the Force. She feels no cold hatred or anything at all. He just watches her, never taking his eyes off hers. She finally strikes him when she sees an opening, but barely cuts his arm. Without warning she is flung to the wall and held there, just by the force of his will. As if that wasn't enough to shock her, a bolt of lighting exits his fingers and hits next to her, where she now sees there is a power switch. The lights in the room come on as he extinguishes his blade.
He looks at his now lightly bleeding arm, and begins to clap.
"Well done, I haven't been wounded this bad since training. You were right, I wasn't trying to find you, but not because I had no intrest in you, it was because I already found you, and I was tracking you. The times you felt my gaze was me letting you feel it. So I could test how you would react. Also, there is some new weapon here. That's why the CIS is defending it like this. We have no intrest in it, only in you."
He lets her go, and shocks the panel again, plunging the room back into darkness.
"We will be watching...I will be watching."
By the light of her own blade she sees him pull both hands to his body, ripping a hole in the wall he made.
"Snips! Are you ok?"
"Yea Skyguy, he was just..."
She points to where the man was, but he is gone, and she can't feel him anywhere.
"...Testing me."
"For what?"
"I really don't know."
"Just glade your safe."
"Thanks."
They continue to walk down the hall as she explains what happened and what he said about the weapon. Anakin's mind is locked on the mission, but Ahsoka's is on the man she just fought...
Oh, yea, link to episode 4 in case anyone didn't see it.
Moddb.com
