28 Carrots Later Game Bible file - Indie Devs

After a few months of working on this project and several people coming and going, I felt I should release the game bible so people can see what my main goals are. This is kind of a rough outline of the project and it does need to be refined however this is my first attempt at writing something like this and really didn't have much idea what to put into it.

Any critique is great, even if you want to say, "OMG this sux!!11!, but here is how you should write it"

Dan