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...Another Drawing
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...i really gotta thank those who responded nicely to my last drawing and i also got to thank those tips...
in this drawing... did i get better?
what else do i need to improve?
and oh, like last time... no overly negative comments like "give up, this is crp, etc,etc..." okay?
*readies a poison dart gun*
zoom out from the face... please XD
The proportions are off ... way off. Need to study more manga close up shots of a similar angle. Primarily the forehead & upper head area are over sized even with the hair which looks more like a wig over her natural hair. The left eye is also a bit too close to the edge of the head, there should be at least a few millimeters of distance. Other features like the nose, mouth, & chin also look diminutive. the shoulder should also be more broad & the neck could be a little higher. Some would also say the eyes are also over sized but that's mostly a matter of opinion & preference.
Over all its a good attempt but there is room for improvement.
i will try to apply that advice... thanks!
I like it, just the mouth is a bit small, and the nose too close-in to the face for a side view.
Still great eyes so simple... so sexy....
It looks a lot better then the other one, she looks better with a smile on her face, and no hat. The hair however, you need to be more creative with.