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Jan 15 2013, 12:58pm Anchor

Hi! I have no idea if you care about this kind of stuff, but I've taken the liberty to check the part descriptions for errors. (13 pages of parts, including the legendary part.)

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Mantibyte Leg
"An horizontal dash" -> "A horizontal dash"

Drill Dash
"A arm part" -> "An arm part"

Neon Meteor Leg
"Its converging shape" -> "It's converging shape"

Voltra Arm
This entry has only one empty line between the first and second section of text.

Hammer Head
This entry has an inconsistent empty line below the title "-damage up-".

Cadion Head
This entry has an inconsistent empty line below the title "-shield life up-".

B-Chipset Head
"as core part." -> "as a core part."

B-Chipset Core
This entry has an inconsistent empty line below the title "-pelvic thrust damage up-".

Voltra Core
This entry has too much text for the textbox.

B-Chipset Arm
This entry has an inconsistent empty line below the title "-damage up-".

Voltra Belt
This entry has only one empty line between the first and second section of text.

Bomba Head
"a build-in mine" -> "a built-in mine"

Subprogram leg
This entry has an inconsistent empty line below the title "damage up-".

Subprogram Hip
This entry has an inconsistent empty line below the title "-pelvic thrust damage up-".

Subprogram Arm 1
First text section doesn't end with a ".".

Subprogram Head
This entry has an inconsistent empty line below the title "-damage up-".

Subprogram Arm 2
This entry has an inconsistent empty line below the title "-uppercut-".

Subprogram Core
This entry has an inconsistent empty line below the title "-shield life up-".

Subprogram Shoulder
This entry has an inconsistent empty line below the title "-shield life up-".

Falcion Head
This entry has an inconsistent empty line below the title "-shield life up-".

Cadion Arm
This entry has an inconsistent empty line below the title "-uppercut-".

Missile Revolver
"An homing" -> "A homing"

Zomzom Core
Entry contains no title. Khepriogram Core has the same ability, but with a title: "-place virus mine-"

Zomzom Hip
Entry contains no title. Bomba Head has the same ability, but with a title: "-place mine-".

Eloctrocrush Dyna-Arm
This entry has an inconsistent empty line below the title "-uppercut-".

Big core
This entry has an inconsistent empty line below the title "-damage up-".

Imperial Battle Head
"An horizontal dash" -> "A horizontal dash"

Bugga Head
This entry has an inconsistent empty line below the title "-damage up-".

Ice-Beak Head
This entry has only one empty line between the first and second section of text.

Frostbyte Shoulder
This entry has only one empty line between the first and second section of text.

Khepriogram Leg
This entry has an inconsistent empty line below the title "-damage up-".
"of a eer mixture" -> "of an eerie mixture"

Frostbyte Hip
This entry has only one empty line between the first and second section of text.

Khepriogram Core
This entry has an inconsistent empty line below the title "-place virus mine-".

Kheprioprogram Hip
"of a eerie mixture" -> "of an eerie mixture"
This entry has only one empty line between the first and second section of text.

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That's all of them!

Jan 17 2013, 10:43am Anchor

Thanks Ray, it's good to have you around! We'll fix it!

Jan 17 2013, 11:24am Anchor

Hi there!

That long list made me doubt my ability to write English! Luckily it's mostly the empty lines. Thanks for taking the time to tell us about these! Normally I don't bother with fixing these things until later on in development, but we're pretty much in late development right now. So I'll fix them for the next update.

Jan 17 2013, 3:37pm Anchor

Heh, anyone that's entering so much text is bound to make a few mistakes. :)

Looking forward to the next update!

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