I feel the voice acting could use some work, and the voices could use some leveling and volume adjustment to better fit the rest of the sound. (Some of it is loud!) Also, the animations seem a tad too rigid to me; the body parts will do things one after the other or move without realistic momentum. Especially with humans but with ACs too, the entire body moves with every gesture and everything has inertia and weight.
However, criticism aside, I still find it impressive and refreshing to see. :) Even if you continue just like this, it will still be a quality production and impressive showcase. Your visual art alone is beautiful, although the animations that tie it together do lack a certain pizazz and refinement at the moment.
I'm still excited for this and both your dedication and the results impress me. Keep it up, Dave!
I thought the voice acting was better than I thought it would be. There has been worse voice acting worse. I apologize if I offended you or the voice actors.
I feel the voice acting could use some work, and the voices could use some leveling and volume adjustment to better fit the rest of the sound. (Some of it is loud!) Also, the animations seem a tad too rigid to me; the body parts will do things one after the other or move without realistic momentum. Especially with humans but with ACs too, the entire body moves with every gesture and everything has inertia and weight.
However, criticism aside, I still find it impressive and refreshing to see. :) Even if you continue just like this, it will still be a quality production and impressive showcase. Your visual art alone is beautiful, although the animations that tie it together do lack a certain pizazz and refinement at the moment.
I'm still excited for this and both your dedication and the results impress me. Keep it up, Dave!
Agreed.The voice acting could use some work.
I thought the voice acting was better than I thought it would be. There has been worse voice acting worse. I apologize if I offended you or the voice actors.
The camera, and movements are jerky...