After Reset™ RPG - a hard sci-fi role-playing open world game with old school top view, which action takes place in the future on Earth dying slowly after nuclear cataclysm that buried nearly all life on the planet.
One day they appeared...
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One day they appeared. A silent and unassailable network of enormous extraterrestrial Artifacts enveloped the Earth. No one knows where they came from, how they had gotten there unnoticed, and what they were there to do. The Artifacts, surrounded by a protective energetic field gave no sign of life for years and blocked all attempts to study them.
Well.... Not good news for the humankind.
haha, pretty cool!
Man...I hope grammar won't be a big issue in the game xD
Man, what do we need to fix in the art?
The art itself is actually pretty damn good, really good actually. I just feel that the English writing could be improved is all I'm really saying.
We takes all your comments really serious (3 guys from UK and 2 guys from US). We are puzzled "what is wrong with our English writing in this art?" )
It's written sort of awkwardly BECAUSE it is grammatically correct.
In this case, it was written in the past-tense but should be (most headlines are written this way) in the present tense, as in:
ALIEN OBJECTS APPEARING ALL OVER THE WORLD
WASHINGTON- Several thousand demonstrators rallied around the objects as president considers calling a "state of emergency"
This makes sense, (I guess) since it seems to flow better and calls for a sense of urgency being in the present tense and all.
Just my two cents (or nickels; Canada doesn't have pennies anymore).
Yes, Euhara summed it good. My bad though, I shouldn't really have said "grammar". I should have instead pointed out that putting the headline in past tense made the thing sounded awkward as it is meant to be a news report, reporting on a current event.
That, as well as the overall writing could generally just be better.
Don't hate please, I'm just being honest.
I guess my English could use a buff too. xD
It's always in the USA .. its getting really boring sry