My newest free song- Critic Thread

if you are trying to appeal game developers with that music it won't work in here
not saying it's bad or anything but dubstep is the only genre of music that fits with absolutely no context/theme/narration/feeling or any other artistic environment, except satirical oeuvres
you should develop your skills in other types of music, especially since dubstep will most likely be dead in one year due to an excessive mainstreaming!

you should just quit. sry dude, you dont have what it takes man. not to be rude, but some1 has to tell you

one way to improve your music is to avoid predefined basic presets (dont tell me you're not using any, I can clearly hear basic presets of FL keys, Osc3x and FL Reverb 2 plugins here)another is to work on your remastering, the reverb effect makes this song sound very dull and bass-heavy on some parts. You can avoid this by changing the LowCut and HighCut values on the FL Reverb 2 plugin, at best just fiddle around with it to see how it sounds
The music itself isnt bad but theres a lot of inconsistency in sound and it seems alot like you are more playing around rather than pursueing a certain way to achieve a dubstep-like sound
as Guiboune said, you may try out other genres - not necessarily because "dubstep has no future", but to to find your own style of creating music