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Gabrielle's Rails (Pronounced Gab-ry-ell-uh) | Locked | |
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Jun 14 2013 Anchor | ||
Hi! I'm quite new to this forum, mostly because I've only recently been looking into Indie-style game creation, but after thinking about it- The year is 2004, and rich lottery winner (No_name) wants to buy an island. Knowing this man is just some loser who thinks he owns the world, the government (I'm very sorry for not specifying a specific government...) gives the man the only island he can afford. Gabriele's Island. Edited by: Marphix |
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Jun 14 2013 Anchor | ||
Why not call it Gabriella instead of pointing out Gabrielle is pronounced like Gabriella. Ok... |
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Jun 14 2013 Anchor | ||
Because Gabrielle is a male name, and Gabrielle is a man. "Uh" not "Ah". (Besides, I'll probably only have the title as Gabrielle's Rails. It just seemed a good idea to point out how it sounded) |
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Jun 14 2013 Anchor | ||
No Gabrielle is a woman's name...Gabriel is the male equivalent lol. |
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Jun 14 2013 Anchor | ||
I know a male Gabrielle. Edited by: Marphix |
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Jun 15 2013 Anchor | ||
You wish to get some critique on the idea, so here it is: the story of the idea you just explained is can be okay-ish (even though there are quite some clichés as you've already pointed out yourself), but it's really nothing more than just that - a story idea. You haven't really mentioned any interesting gameplay mechanics, only that the game relies on the speed of the player, and that's usually ultimately what a game is about, else it would be better to just create a movie. |
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Jun 16 2013 Anchor | ||
I realize this, which is why I placed it inside the Ideas board. I'm trying develop a story, but this is a fairly new idea. I'm open to suggestions on how to polish this up, of course. |
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Jun 16 2013 Anchor | |
The male spelling I believe is Gabriel.As in the archangel.But I could be wrong,too. -- "sweet" little old lady |
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Jun 16 2013 Anchor | ||
That is a way to spell it, but in [Italian, I believe] it can also be spelt Gabriele with a slightly different pronunciation. |
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Jun 16 2013 Anchor | ||
I came back because I forgot to critique the idea in a constructive way but it's mostly just a story? What gameplay is going to be in this game, the idea itself here doesn't really tell me what the game is about. All I could gather really was that it was a side scrolling game where you have to complete small puzzles within a time limit or the cave collapses but other than that I couldn't really grasp the idea. "This whole game relies on the speed of the player"; all that is really saying is that the whole game has a time limit. |
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Jun 17 2013 Anchor | ||
Wow, I must be really terrible at describing my mind. >:\ I did a bit of searching, and actually found a game which shows what I mean in ways of how the character would move. Check out Sarah's Run on Kongregate. |
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Jun 17 2013 Anchor | |
Okay,then that makes both of us right.I like that. -- "sweet" little old lady |
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